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for Will you be my daddy?

by Sasunarufan13

person aww
schedule November 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
why do you tocher teddy so and the creep come on can someone say stlaker! exolent its awsume love the idea of prego harry
schedule November 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, ominous. Sneaking a paper into someones pocket without them knowing, very sneaky. Great chapter as always. Looking forward to reading more. Though I am surprised they let the boys eat candy from strangers. You never know if the killer poisoned it.
person Claudia
schedule November 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for the new chapter =] But I'm wondering, will there be a reunion between Harry, Ron and Hermione? Just curious xD And god, now i wanna know who the kidnapper is. It's a creepy thought that he has been so close to Harry. X
person bcjink
schedule November 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh poor Teddy *super huggles for him*. Love the others reactions to the baby. Looking forward to the next :)
person Claudia
schedule November 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I know Scorpius is just happy but I find him actually annoying xD And I feel so sorry for Teddy! I just wanna hug him. Hopefully he can get used to the idea, and accept the fact that Harry is pregnant. Thank you =] x
schedule November 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
What a cute chapter. Burns aside lol. I'm surprised Luna hasn't picked up on Teddy given how intune with such things she is.
schedule November 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
poor teddy, he's so insecure and jealous and no one knows about it since he won't talk, so it's just festering away in there and when the eruption finally comes, well, it'll be messy. there have already been some warning rumbles with he lashed out at Scorpi. i hope it gets dealt with soon. Ted's to sweet a kid to be left languishing emotionally like this.
person delia cerrano
schedule November 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh my the angst..the angst! Poor Teddy..He just doesn't feel loved enough. Stands to reason with everything happening so fast (meeting, moving in, marriage, now a baby) Scorpius is the "natural" son with his father & mother plus Harry in his happy life. Sorpius is a godson who lived with his grandmother now Harry that is the linchpin of his life! It is perfectly understandable that he is worried sick - frantic to maintain a loving relationship. He really hasn't had enough time to bond tightly and learned to trust Draco implicitely. Can't stand the sadness..can't wait till Fridays update!
person Cham
schedule November 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I honestly just want Teddy to be ok. I want him to finally let out his feelings on the matter because if h doesnt than things can get worse. And he is really such a good kid. He is just lost :( I wont cry lol I may shed a tear but I wont sob. thank you so much for this chapter/
schedule November 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I know it's completely normal for a child to be jealous. But I know that they can also be happy cause they know that they would be the oldest sibling. I am the oldest of 3 children. I can't remember how I reacted to my mom having my brother than my sister 6 years later. I think I was pretty calm about it. I don't think that I thought that I was going to be ignored or anything like that. We're all different after all.