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for Will you be my daddy?

by Sasunarufan13

person Demented Hunter
schedule November 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This story is really good so far, I've been reading it since about when you posted the fourth chapter. There are only two things that I noticed about it, instead of "hard on" you always use "hard one" and Dragon Pox is a disease that both children and adults can get. In the sixth book Slughorn mentions that Draco's grandfather died from Dragon Pox. I just that I would point those two things out. Aside from these two things this story is absolutely amazing. I can't wait until the next chapter is posted.
person delia cerrano
schedule November 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oooh does it have to end? Couldn't you just go on till the baby is born then keep going till Teddy goes to college & Scorpius & Teddy fall in love & the baby (probably a girl) gets engaged to Blaise's child etc etc. Can you tell I like your Harry & Draco & children. Whose trying to hurt/kill Harry??? We saw the blonde hair but no other clues at least that I caught. Ginny has red hair. Pansy doesn't care enough as she has Blaise now. Ron & Hermione? Nah, why would they hurt Harry? But what does Lucius gain if it's him?
person Cham
schedule November 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I just want the angst in Teddy to get better and all the relationships he is scared of to mend and and and, I just want him to be happy.

Thank you for the chapter.
person Anon
schedule November 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hahaha I laughed so hard when Scorpius called Harry mommy, it's just his luck. And I can't wait to find out who the killer is. I'm so curious.
schedule November 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
i don't think it's going to be long now before explosion Ted, a kid can only handle misery for so long before he vents... even if he has connected with draco since.
person bcjink
schedule November 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter. GRr I just knew the bad guy would show himself soon. *snickering* Again, poor Teddy, death by cleavage lol. Thanks for updating, even though you aren't feeling well. Looking forward to the next, take care. :)
schedule November 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ha I wondered when that guy would come back to threaten them. :)

I hope Harry tells draco, even though that would make him a mother hen, it would be stupid not to :) (but who says Harry isnt stupid sometimes)

great chapter.
person Lexie
schedule November 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love this story keep it up!. loving the cliffhanger.I'm with teddy that luna seems fishy i hope she is not the kidnapper.Will harry ever find out why teddy dose not want a new baby. I'm sad that ron and hermione didn't have a big appearance that would have been interesting too see their reaction to harry's news. so are we only expecting one baby or multiple babys? and will harry ever find out how much severus cares? i can't wait to find out how he got those memory's.
person delia cerrano
schedule November 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh Oh Here comes the mystery person again! I cannot guess who it is. What do they get out of Harry being preggers with Draco's baby? It has to be a Malfoy because of the very blonde hair that was glimpsed...Lucius??
schedule November 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
oopsie... can't see how they forgot about him. still, stress is bad for barer and child and surely he doesn't want har to lose the kid to early... or why go to the effort of kidnapping him and stuffing a potion into him in the first place.