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for Will you be my daddy?

by Sasunarufan13

person aww
schedule November 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
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he has teddy give him back give him back *hunts ba*erd down and hacks him up to bits* you got a problem with that? didnt think so give him backkkkkk now *pouts*
person Anon
schedule November 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
It is Lunas even weirder twin brother isn't it?
person leahsydney
schedule November 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I normally don't follow Mpreg stories, but this one is actually pretty good. I would just like to comment on your mention that Teddy is a bit OOC. Honestly, since the only thing we know about Teddy is that some time in his late teens, he kisses Ron and Hermione's daughter Victoire, its not really possible to write him OOC. And his reaction to the pregnancy is completely typical for a little boy who has gone through so many changes so quickly. It was a spectacular tantrum. A well written story over all.
person Madamdragon
schedule November 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
OK in a way but not a bad one I was hopeing for something to happen to Teddy to add to the drama and wish granted. Good update hope you update again soon, cuz I don't think I can wait til tues. :)
person Claudia
schedule November 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ohmygod. I knew it was bad when I read 'dark blond man'. You can't just leave us with a cliffhanger like that! Poor Teddy. And I'm still curious who the kidnapper is. I can't wait until thursday. thank you again.
schedule November 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
this is what happens when you don't inform your kids that they're in danger too... or make sure they've adjusted to the idea of a new arrival, rather than just assuming they have. Teddy had to bust out some time, he just has the worst possible timing.
person aww
schedule November 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
awlays so mean to teddy what did he ever do to you? still love the story cant whait for the next update yay :}
person bcjink
schedule November 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad you're alright again. I'm still fighting whatever it is I have, so I sympathize with Scorpious wanting snuggles. And I'm probably giggling waaay more than I should about Harry being called mommy, but that was too freaking cute. O:)And of course, gotta love the lemons ;) Take care, looking forward to finding out what's next!
schedule November 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I'll be sorry to see this story end, but am glad of the sequel. It always seems that the good things don't last long. Poor Teddy. I can understand his feelings all too well. And where was Draco when I was younger?? I know he was a prat, but he's 100 times better than the guy I knew. What a toe rag he was. Well, thanks for the story, and keep up the good work!! I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
schedule November 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ugh, your killing me. I want to see how this ends! Lol Great chapter.