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for Will you be my daddy?

by Sasunarufan13

schedule June 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Aw this is already shaping up to be a great story! I'm craving the whole thing now! If I didn't hate FF so much I would be over there reading the already posted chapters instead of sitting here lol.
schedule June 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
i'm rereading the story again. yet i know what's going to happen in the coming chapters, it still draws me in every time!! i love this story!
schedule June 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
i don't really blame har. he and snape didn't get on and besides, frazzeled minds don't think very clearly.
heh, i wonder how long it will be before har is leaving Ted at the Malfo's rather than Andi's. ^^
schedule June 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wow, another great chapter! Thank you for posting here. I can't wait for the next postings.
schedule June 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wow so Severus is alive? Great. Hope more is to come soon please.
schedule June 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh how I love this Fic!
schedule June 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I am so thrilled by the story and the words, I forgot the check flaws or anything to comment on...I just so liked this new chapter !
Adding something new that just not concentrate on scorpius Trying to get Harry in the family!
And as a fan of mystery/detective story and books, this is just perfect <3

- Annabel_Lee
schedule June 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Awww teddy is having a little bit of jealousy problem over Scorpius !
Then again, it's well written and I Like how you created a problem with Teddy , Naturally I would have thought he would team up with Scorpius,
But I like it better that way, it adds to the story, And I just simply love it <3

Can't wait for chapter 3. <3

- Annabel_lee
schedule June 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh tooo tooo cute!!!! If only Scorpius could get Teddy on his side. That bit of jealousy on Teddy's part was adorable.
schedule June 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
ok I love scopious! Poor teddy is jealus more please