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for Will you be my daddy?

by Sasunarufan13

person Nubia
schedule July 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I like your history very interesting.
schedule July 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wow, another great chapter! Looks like Scorp has his work cut out for him, but with his father, well, he'll get it done. Looks like Harry is going to wind up being "Draco-sexual"! I'm looking forward to more!
schedule July 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
So he quits a case. Whats the worse that could happen? Update again soon please.
person Claudia
schedule July 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I believe I have said it before, but I absolutely adore Scorpius. I liked the chapter, and I was indeed very surprised (In a good way!) that you already updated. I am looking forward to the new chapter on friday =] Love, Claudia
schedule July 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
up dating speed is yay worthy but watch those typos. there were at least three that i spotted including one misused word. Evasive (meaning to dodge, escape etc) instead of invasive (meaning to pry, interfere in etc)

Oh, no, you're not gonna turn har into a house husband are you? i mean, come one, that'd be a hard core waste of his talents.

Still, i'm glad he and Sev managed a conversation without maiming each other.

i wonder if the villain is Creevey or Weasley related. I'm surprised George hasn't kept in touch with har, considering what he owes him.
schedule July 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ginny's a b****. Ron is an a******. And Hermione needs to mind her business. Kudos to Harry for not taking her back.
person Leania07
schedule July 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I'm enjoying this so far. Normally I'm not a big fan of Drarry stories, but I thought I'd give this a try. It's done quite well, and I'm very pleased with it so far. I'm more a Snarry fan, but this one has just the right amount of interest factor; plus I love the adorable Scorpious and the jealous Teddy. Since this is a Drarry I'm assuming they will get together eventually, and now my mind is working in overdrive wondering who the culprit will be. Someone from Hogwarts? An obsessed fan? An envious Auror? So many options! Keep up the good work, I look forward to more!

Leania
person SP777
schedule July 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
about #7...

Gotta admit that WAS interesting.
person scottish_lassie
schedule July 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I have to say that you are a very talented writer I just love this story I find my self anticipating updates and I hope you update soon
schedule July 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
0.o does this one have M preg or is that merely Scorpie's fevered imagination at work.
Snape can't help being a venomous dick. it's what he does best. >>
I'm glad he's decided to pull in his horns and help though. those poor boys... worse yet, their poor families. Still, haven't they ever heard of stranger danger?
I can't blame Ted for being a bit jealous. Even for a chibi, scorpi is being positively blatant.