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for Will you be my daddy?

by Sasunarufan13

schedule August 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad Teddy doesn't seem to be upset or jealous about their relationship and I like that this is important enough to Draco that he is nervous. Snape babysitting lol.
person Rachel
schedule August 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
FINALLY THEY KISSED *flails happily* im so happy for them and for scorpius and teddy. i can't wait for the next chapter.
person bcjink
schedule August 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
O.o *gasp* super long lemons?! Lol awesome, bring on the smut! Loved the date, and how nervous they both were, so cute. Very glad Teddy is going to give Scorpius a chance too. I'm hoping his grandma doesn't cause a stink with Teddy calling Harry dad again does she?
schedule August 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
a few oddly put together sentences in this one but no active typos that i could see.
Anyway, yay for har giving Draco a chance.
schedule August 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Awwwwww the end of the chapter was so cute!
schedule August 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Well I am glad that Harry will give Draco a chance. Can't wait to see where things will go. Update again soon please.
person Claudia
schedule August 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Yeah! It finally happened! can't wait to see what will happen:), and I am glad that Teddy is getting okay with it. thank you! X
person SParker
schedule August 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
about #15...

So, Teddy has subconciously accepted being a son of a Malfoy
without realizing it. :-)

I know you have the story written already, but you wouldn't by
any chance consider doing a scene where Teddy decides to one day take
on the coloring of a Malfoy...to Draco's surprise.
person Claudia
schedule August 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hm! I like<3 It's nice that Harry is starting to like Draco to. And once again, thank you for writing this lovely story, and for updating regularly. X
person SParker
schedule August 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
about #14..

Have to admit that was a short chapter.

I'm surprised no one has really mentioned this, will Ron & hermione
make a brief appearance?