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One of the best I've read!!

Read this story a,k today and done nothing else! Totally adored it!! Loved it so much., thank you :-)

This is a bit different style of Draco/Harry story. Granted the boys rivalry seems rather reminiscent of a certain Gryffendor and Slytherin couple. Draco's son is cute and almost as spoiled as his father was. I'm looking forward to seeing how this story takes off.

This was the second best fan fiction I have read in my life. I think it's incredibly written, it gets 5 out of 5 stars from me. It's amazing how you wrote this so well when English isn't even your native language. You have inspired me so much, and influenced my own Drarry fan fic. I can't wait to read the sequel!

Your Daphne makes me think of Santana, in Glee ! I think the way you 'write Daphe', like, how you make her talk and act, looks a lot like Santana, which is a good thing because she is hilarious, and so is your Daphne :3

noted your AN on next chapter...being an ex teacher, I have seen some of the worst...some aimed at my boys...got one teacher when I was told that "we" meaning teachers are trained to see these things and know how to deal with them..."OH Yeah? I asked her??? yes was her reply we understand that parents love their children and don't see them as they are... among other replys I mentioned that not only had I been a "trained teacher, but had my Masters in ED...shut her up... nasty parent that I am...anyway, cheers to the parents who have the guts to stand up for their children!

good story...good characterization of the bad teachers...
on to the next chapter!

I must say that I didn't know who the killer was until you told me and that`s exactly how I love it!! You kept me guess this whole story; Who is the killer? Will Harry and Draco get together? What was the potion? Will Teddy be okay? When will the press find out? Who do I know in the entire series that has blond hair? (a longer list then I thought) What about Ginny? Will the baby be okay? to finally, Does it get any better then this? It seems that all of my questions were answered although not in the order that I asked them :P Including the last one, No it doesn't get any better then what you wrote and I can't wait to see what else you have to offer. You are one of a kind, with a one of a kind plot and story. You combined so many different elements to the story, from romance to fantasy to horror to suspense to finally romance again. Thank you for writing and sharing this, I really enjoyed reading this and I hope you enjoyed writing it just as much.
With love,
Mari-chan

Hey, just thought you might like to know that I'm loving this story so far, have been reading up to this chapter on fanfiction.net, and just had to look you up on here to see the uncensored version. hehe. You are a really good writer, and I know I would appreciate it if somebody still reviewed when they read my stories, after all this time. I still smile every time someone favorites one of them. This is a lovely idea for a story, and i'm sure i'll read more of your fics.

thank you , I really had a great time reading this story, I love it !!

I really enjoyed this story,but it really could've used me as a beta-- lots of mistakes sort of took me out of the story from time to time. But that just proves again
what a great story this is even with all the typos. The relationship progressed quickly but it still made sense in the story. I loved the kids and the idea of a pregnancy potion
and the fact that Harry and Teddy didn't know men could get pregnant-- that was really funny. I didn't stop reading this for days. So much fun. Thanks for sharing it.