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for Will you be my daddy?

by Sasunarufan13

person delia cerrano
schedule October 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Here I thought it was Ginny that kidnapped him. She would be stupid enough to think that would bring Harry back to her.
Yeah, Draco ouldn't have screamed so long & girly like & faint. But now he needs to pull it up & go after info & go get his Harry!
schedule September 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter! Yep, I'd say Harry "fell"on his bum! I think Daphne has the ability to become a great ally too. Now all Harry needs is for Teddy to become more relaxed and secure in their relationship. Keep up the good work!!
person she-who-waits-in-darkness
schedule September 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Holy shit all hell if going to break loose!
person delia cerrano
schedule September 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wow I didn't even have an inkling that was coming! Good job!! I'll bet it's that red headed Weasley witch! If so this should be good when she tries to convince Harry to give Draco & the boys up (because she sure won't want any kids around...not her). I hope she doesn't just use a potion or magic that would be really wrong as he wouldn't even know she was bad or miss his loves.
person Claudia
schedule September 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Damn.. This is such a cliffhanger. Now I'm curious xD My guess is Ginny. And I have to say, I really like Daphne. She is sweet, clever and just brilliant. I love the way you made her. And thank you for updating! X
person obsessed362
schedule September 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Arrgh! A cliff hanger?! really exciting and i can"t wait till tuesday.
person SParker
schedule September 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
about #27...

How will Draco react??!!?? Gooood question! Man o' man,
I'm sorely tempted to sneak a peek at the next chapter, but
I won't..I WILL exercise restraint!

*must...not....give..in..to....TEMPTATION!*

By the way, good job on this chapter. :-)
schedule September 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Yay updates! love the chapters, hate the cliffhanger (pout) now update asap!!!!!
person bcjink
schedule September 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
O.o OMG NooOOOoo!!!! *flails* Evil, bad cliff hanger! I think I may die if I have to wait all the way until Tuesday! :( ....ok maybe not literally but aaaahhhggh! And you said Harry finds out the hard way? O,O Oh I'm so nervous! So yeah...you did a good job, and thanks for the update lol.
schedule September 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love this story a lot. It's really well done, I just hate that you only do one chapter at a time when you've posted the whole thing on ff.net. Even 2 chapters would be good. But whatever, can't wait till next tuesday.