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for Will you be my daddy?

by Sasunarufan13

person delia cerrano
schedule October 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Well I had a good time reading that chapter! Teddy even acted more mature than his age...or is it very smart for his age?
Anyway I think Harry having a baby so soon after saying they'd get married & him not so sure if his space in the family
was going to be ok. And we still don't know who is after Harry!
person aww
schedule October 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
grate story i cant bleve that bloody f*in doctor nobody puts down darry ok its just not done the will be conqusnces ( mintly throttling said doctor).. thay think that thire soo smart...."grumbles"....
person bcjink
schedule October 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
LOL Oh nooo! *throws you a life preserver* I highly recommend ice cream therapy. X) I don't know what you're talkin' about, that was a sweet lemon, and I enjoyed it. Poor Sev, ugh, now I'm even more nervous about the sequel cuz I don't want anything bad to happen to him 0.o Does he perhaps get a 'happily ever after', do the boys? Looking forward to the next, and hopefully seeing the boys' reactions?
person remey
schedule October 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon I need more of drarry and family I so love this
person delia cerrano
schedule October 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
The boys don't know about the baby yet do they? I'm trying to keep up with so many stories right now I forget important stuff like that sometimes. Also now how will they react to Draco & Harry getting married even if it's not right away?
Scorpius will love the baby & Marriage...that's what he wanted. But Teddy while he likes (maybe loves?) Draco still
seems to have a hesitation...feeling like he will lose Harry to Draco & Scorpius...doesn't seem to like `even sharing him or having Scorpius as a brother. Not as bad as he was at first but still...
person Claudia
schedule October 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Nothing wrong with the Lemon, Honey. It was sweet^^ And I have never read Mpreg before, you know? I never liked it. This is the only one with Mpreg I like. So, that means a lot! And I am happy that Harry decided to keep the baby. Thank you again! X
schedule October 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love this fanfic! It's the first MPreg I've actually read, not really being too keen on it before, but this is awesome! I can't wait for the next update!
schedule October 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
they really need to give har a manual of do's and don'ts for a pregnant guy otherwise he might accidentally abort the kid... which would sort of render his v day gift to draco moot. This way draco stops screaming at him too.
i think draco's rushing the proposal a bit but i can understand he wouldn't want his kid to be a bastard... and that he genuinely loves har.
schedule October 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Aw, what a sweet chapter! So mean though, dumping the boys on Sev like that XD All well, the kids are good for him.
schedule October 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Nice chapter. I think Harry needs to take pre-emptive measures though. I don't remember if he is still friends with the other Weasleys, but even if he isn't it is time he confronted them about Ginny and gave them proof. It would be a step in taking back control of his life as I could see her trying to turn everyone against him and as he is going to be having a baby, he needs all the support he can get.