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for Will you be my daddy?

by Sasunarufan13

person Kotori-Sensei
schedule May 12, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I'm kind of worried with Teddy...I...well...I better just keep reading.
But I can't avoid to point that: Why did not Luna say anything about him? Like: "Look all those CCTYCJYGCVKGH fliying over his head..."
:D
person Kotori-Sensei
schedule May 12, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Ok, I know a lot hapenned in this chapter, and O-M-G that cliffhanger! but the most important thing in my head is: REMUS!!!! WTH!!!! OMG! IS HE ALIVE? A RENCARNATION??????? *-*
person Kotori-Sensei
schedule May 12, 2015 at 12:00 AM
baby! baby! baby!!!!!
Black hair and grey eyes. Gorgeous!!!
person Kotori-Sensei
schedule May 11, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Ummm yeah, is me...20.000 chapters after my last review...SORRYSORRYSORRYSORRYSORRYSORRYSORRYSORRYSORRYSORRYSORRYSORRYSORRYSORRYSORRYSORRYSORRYSORRYSORRYSORRYSORRYSORRYSORRYSORRYSORRYSORRYSORRYSORRYSORRYSORRYSORRYSORRYSORRYSORRYSORRYSORRYSORRYSORRYSORRYSORRYSORRYSORRYSORRYSORRYSORRYSORRYSORRYSORRYSORRYSORRYSORRYSORRYSORRYSORRYSORRYSORRYSORRYSORRYSORRYSORRYSORRYSORRYSORRYSORRYSORRY!!! But is your fault!!! (And that is me, avoiding the blame) Because you fic is really good so I was like: I'll read one more and THEN I'll post something...and well, here we are.
So, Is an amazing fic. I really love Scorpius althrough he is a bit pushy...maybe 1, 2 o 3 little spanks could help -_-
Now, WHO THE HELL HAS HARRY!!!!
person Kotori-Sensei
schedule May 10, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Hello there. Happy Mothers Day...if you are one 😆
Anyway. Got here by mere coincidence, but so far, I'm loving Scorpius. He sounds so sweet and cute!!! 😍
person Kotori-Sensei
schedule May 10, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 2 and I'm loving Scorpious more because he is so cute!!!!!
person Kotori-Sensei
schedule May 10, 2015 at 12:00 AM
YEAH! SNAPE!!!
Well to be honest, I never liked him that much until last book...jijijiji
But I love this kind or fics were the important characters are alive. It brings a little bit "more" to the history, because you can actually use them, instead of just been memories.
person Kotori-Sensei
schedule May 10, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Oh boy....Harry and Draco are getting in such big trouble by not making things clear to Scorpius since the beginnig, or at least in this moment with the drawins ...
person Kotori-Sensei
schedule May 10, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 7: oh creepy stalker-assasin-psyco!!! Nice touch! 😉
person piper-tolkien
schedule February 20, 2015 at 12:00 AM
omg that was an awesome sex scene! and the christmas gifts? i wish my mom and dad bought me a puppy for christmas lol loved this chapter :)