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for The only one I\'ll ever love

by Sasunarufan13

person lupa2717
schedule July 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
so touching... will there be a sequel? it has a bit of afragnance of the continuation following...
person Naomi
schedule July 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
oh wow....okay so reading the title and summary i assumed that the problem with this loving Harry and not their child would be addressed, or solves, or something. and then reading the way Scorpius feels about his blonde papa....that was heart wrenching. but i have to admit, i had no idea that we would be left in such a drastic cliffie. i mean, really? more children? and draco will not ever love his children? and harry....i know he is oblivious, but even he has to see this...

and what about when Scorp and the new baby are older? or what if they decide to have more than one? oh goodness....this just has so many possibilities. i really like this story, but it left so many more questions than answers for me. depressing as hell, yet beautiful in its quiet desperation.

poor scorpius.

poor draco.

poor baby.

and poor oblivious harry....
schedule July 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I could never imagine not loving my own child like that. While I do like this story, I always love drarry stories, I just didn't like how Draco treated Scorpius. It's called child neglect, which is what Draco is doing. He shouldn't be so jealous.
schedule June 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Is it sad that I can actually picture Draco doing something like this?
And great chapter!
schedule June 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
how very sad. I know draco is good at pretending but still, how long could he keep up the fact he cares nothing for his kids. As they get older there are going to be tells. and scorpy will either love the other kid to bits or be completely jealous of it.