rate_review Reviews

oh wow... I finally got a chance to read this story (I am so behind at reading!) and I love love love this!!! It is such a unique idea and I love how Snape is observing everything and recognizing the connections between Harry's behavior and the probable reasons for then. Every chapter was so enjoyable to read. Can't wait to read more :)

three stories this time, great
I'm glad too, that Snape hadn't told Harry off when he'd had the chance to :)
this points system, you know, I missed it in later chapters, mayby you could change it a bit this time to get it mentioned more often?
still love the story

I hoped you'd update a bit more often, but well, only because I love this story so much.
oh, and happy holidays, just in case that you won't update on Friday next week, you'll be packing, I guess? drive carefully and safely, expecially since you're driving with the bike, I'd miss your stories if you risked your neck on your way
Gryffindor!

well, at least they're not going to starve to death. just enough to keep them ticking over. I hope they can stay sane at the end of it. Being locked in like that has got to freak you out. the idea of personal points is a good one. It should keep them distracted.
I wish snape luck getting theo and har to sleep. He's going to need it.

you have added chapter titles this time, great
this is still one of my favorites, even if I can't really decide, all of your stories are just great
Gryff

you know, I always have to think of "the impossible we do at once, miracles take a little longer" when I read this story of yours, especially with the sequel. Tears is already an epic story, but this one is even more epic and I'm sitting on pins and nails again, even if I know the story already

great chapter, great story
love the blankets with the essays halfway written on it, you have to make one for me :P

I wouldn't have picked that you weren't a native English speaker... er writer?

I wonder how long it will take sev to realize that har is speaking from experience and avoiding sleep for much the same reason theo is.

Interesting, so the magic is going stale like air might. have they accidentally created a magic free zone? is it everyones magic? What i mean is, is the magic getting weaker cause everyone is drawing from a limited communal pool or does each person have yay many shots in their wand before it's tapped?

Can you survive 21 days without food if you have water? Also, what about going to the loo? sanitation in a lock in situation is definitely an issue.

glad the rest of the castle has been freed up. So, it's not a magical security system, but rather a bad combination of spells. hmmmm. I'm wondering if the portrait hasn't been back because he can't come back. That would go with the 'dead magic' zone theory.

looking forward to next chappie.

this is ominous. How long will the castle stay locked down? I mean, surely it isn't meant to lock down for 21 days... that would be stupid cause if you didn't have access to water those trapped would be dead by then and what's the point of a security system that kills you?
Are the house elves also locked down?

great to have another story of yours here
and if you take your bike home tomorrow, then I'm sure you'll be happy enough to share anything with your readers :D
Ravenclaw, of course