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September 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad that Severus starts to re-think a few things about Harry, and I'm glad that he starts to even be a bit less formal with the students, the closer they get, the better will be their chances of survival, still love the story
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August 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
huh? somehow this didn't work, giving a review. well, I'll give it again
I was just about telling you that it took Snape pretty long to discover things about Harry, that it was pretty time to finally start seeing that there was more to Harry's person
I was just about telling you that it took Snape pretty long to discover things about Harry, that it was pretty time to finally start seeing that there was more to Harry's person
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August 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted to ask? Isn't this the title of one of your stories? great choice of chapter title and I'm still glad that you're doing this fic here too
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August 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted to ask? Isn't this the title of one of your stories? great choice of chapter title and I'm still glad that you're doing this fic here too
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August 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
love that you have put this story on here!!! now I have to reread :)
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August 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
things are sounding pretty not good for har. He's on the knife edge of starvation already.
You seem to like making Ron a selfish, violent prat huh. Though, admittedly, the canon character does give you plenty to work with being a jealous, insecure, immature little brat.
If the room is locked up tight, how is it air and stuff is getting in? Does the ward encircle the entire set of rooms? What i mean is, if they made an explosive potion and tried to blow a hole in the back room or the floor, would they hit ward?
You seem to like making Ron a selfish, violent prat huh. Though, admittedly, the canon character does give you plenty to work with being a jealous, insecure, immature little brat.
If the room is locked up tight, how is it air and stuff is getting in? Does the ward encircle the entire set of rooms? What i mean is, if they made an explosive potion and tried to blow a hole in the back room or the floor, would they hit ward?
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August 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Please, please, PLEASE. CONTINUE THIS!!! I have not read a.more.orrigional.story in a while. I really.am enjoying this plot, it is so different from anything else I've read. I love that the charactera are staying pretty true t o themselves .
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July 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
deep chapter
on one hand, a teacher should be ready to always handle all his students the same, but on the other hand, considering Snape's position, his experiences with James Potter and his hate, his jealousy, I think that it takes a lot to see reason and trying to handle Harry the same as his snakes. congrats, evil, for another great chapter
on one hand, a teacher should be ready to always handle all his students the same, but on the other hand, considering Snape's position, his experiences with James Potter and his hate, his jealousy, I think that it takes a lot to see reason and trying to handle Harry the same as his snakes. congrats, evil, for another great chapter
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July 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
and here Severus learns more about Harry, I'm really glad that you keep this slow going, even if I think Severus could help Harry more if he knew all from the beginning on
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July 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I hope sleep will help har, cause he can't keep giving his 'food' away. Not if he wants to survive.
i spotted one typo Abjection when you meant Objection? On the whole not bad though.
i wonder how snape will respond to find out that har has been abused and neglected. You can be he won't be letting him go back there.
i spotted one typo Abjection when you meant Objection? On the whole not bad though.
i wonder how snape will respond to find out that har has been abused and neglected. You can be he won't be letting him go back there.