rate_review Reviews

I like how you are handling this, you do a good job with both of them.

I find it strange how much I enjoyed these two chapters, considering how little as actually happened. You're portrayal of Bellatrix is also quite interesting. Very sane but with dabbles of madness. Seeing the beauty of death when the rest of us see pain and heartache. It's poetic in a way and true to the character and honestly it wasn't something that needed to to explained as you did in chapter two. I think it might have had more of am impact if you'd shown it, shown her creating a masterpiece of someone's demise and being able to see the beauty within it. Detached yet in awe. Just my opinion and in no way something that will be easy to put to paper.

What I don't quite understand is Hermione's stand in all of this. From the way you've described the way they look at each other, the way they can feel each other when they are close I