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yes, I too say that this relationship has to be, because Snape and Harry are doing so well together, especially if you are the author throwing them together
I see you started answering reviews in your chapters :D
thanks for sharing this with us

Possessive and protective... two of my favorite words.

Oh and about wondering if Snape was his dad... I was like 'did I say that? what was I thinking?'

That was at the beginning when you had mentioned Lily... and I know that would have messed things up because then the story couldn't have went anywhere which would have been awful! lol

I like that Snape can sense Harry and knew that something was wrong with him when he was being beaten up by Ron but I wonder if Snape realizes that he's going to have to watch those warnings very closely. He left Harry alone because he got the feeling from Harry that it wasn't too serious... but what Harry considers 'not serious' is NOT what most people would consider not serious. Harry needed help but he's so used to being treated that way and worse that it did not send the right message to Snape. Severus will have to watch for all warnings.

love the story! update soon!

I really like your story! And I love how your taking your time with it because you really are explaining BDSM the way it needs to be explained to a beginner and it does make the story more realistic because most people do see that and think well I just don't get it. That sounds gross and wrong. But like I tell a lot of people it doesn't take a lot of trust to have someone give you pleasure it does take a lot of trust to allow them to give you pain even in a safe and controlled environment. I'm also one of the last people that should be giving grammer critism but watch your tenses. You made a lot of words into action verbs (ing) when they shouldn't have been.

So. Snape has gotten his information on a few new facts.
And he was pretty fast in revealing who was the one to hurt Ron.

Not really surprising, seeing as
1) Harry is not as supply as he wants and
b) Snape has seen Harrys memories.

Anyway. The story is good
I am waiting to see what will come next

Quinn

I so love seeing Severus going into a protective mood... Harry is far from total recovery but step by step, Severus is helping and fixing him. Now I am just waiting for the Potion Master's revenge on a certain stupid and bigoted redhead... I was so angry with him in the last chapter I hope he will pay!
Thank you for your answer to my last review and thank you for the update!

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I'm glad Sev has patience cause he's going to need it dealing with har. Har has a LOT of damage, both physical and mental, that he needs help and guidance with sorting. Most of he doesn't even realize he's carrying since he's known no other way of life. I hope Sev does go to the other two cause i can't see Ron stopping. Har would be much safer and I think, far more stable in closer contact with his dom. It would also give him more opportunity to learn to trust snape.
at any rate, the dursleys have serious karma owing.

severus would be pissed when he finds out!!!! wait won't the necklace thing notify severus about what happen???
this is an interesting story! please update soon. i like the way how you are slowly developing the relationship (with harry's fear and stuff).
is there a way for me to know when you update this story if so may you please tell me?

oh my gosh I loved loved loved this chapter! well not the end... Ron is horrible and Snape better hurry up and get there to rescue Harry... but everything else! I love that Snape loves Harry... maybe lol. That was so perfect. And I love how he is studying and watching Harry so carefully and working to gain his trust while still being determined to find out what he needs to know. I look forward to when Snape goes to Harry's uncle's house. Snape is truly going to protect and take care of Harry. He is going to be furious when he sees what Ron is doing to Harry. I can't wait!

I see the last chapter ends with bashing

Please don't add Dumbeldore to the bashing.
I like Dumbeldore, and see him as a maybe old man with his faults and all, but in my opinion he cares for Harry deeply. Please consider if you can give him a "good" part in this story. Maybe he can be the one that says that Harrys decision is not disturbing and all... And he can be the one who brings new facts to Snapes atention? Something like this, please?

Other than that, the story has a good rythmus (not too fast, not too slow)