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September 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Amazing as usual. I was gleeful when Severus told Weasley about his punishment, all with class and elegance... I liked Severus' description from Harry's point of view, particularly his voice... I shivered. You spoiled me, I swear. Now I wish I have a sexy and dominant Severus just for me.
The use of the blindfold was very weel written and accurate. Harry's emotion about it were logicql and I could very well imagine be in his place. I sympathize with Severus and I congratilate him for his control because Harry seems to be a very tempting submissive!
Thank you for the update!
The use of the blindfold was very weel written and accurate. Harry's emotion about it were logicql and I could very well imagine be in his place. I sympathize with Severus and I congratilate him for his control because Harry seems to be a very tempting submissive!
Thank you for the update!
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September 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Sev has a long, long way to go with har. Sigh, trust Ron to get the wrong idea and lash out because of it.
I hope har didn't take that mean that he is NEVER to masturbate... but knowing har he probably has... and i doubt he's really gotten horny before. He's had far to much on his plate to even think about it.
I think har is going to need a lot of trust exercises before he stops flinching and trying to lock everything down. besides sev now he has NO support network so it'll take him a while to click to the idea that he can TRUST and give control to someone else and they'll help him. he is so used to relying on on one but himself and that habit it hard to break.
I hope har didn't take that mean that he is NEVER to masturbate... but knowing har he probably has... and i doubt he's really gotten horny before. He's had far to much on his plate to even think about it.
I think har is going to need a lot of trust exercises before he stops flinching and trying to lock everything down. besides sev now he has NO support network so it'll take him a while to click to the idea that he can TRUST and give control to someone else and they'll help him. he is so used to relying on on one but himself and that habit it hard to break.
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September 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I just love this story. It moves slowly but its the good kind of slow. It keeps you on the edge of your seat and makes you want more. Poor Harry just doesn't seem to realize yet that Severus wants him to feel good and not be ashamed of it. I'm just waiting for Harry to finally give in to his lust and passion. Oh I just can't wait for that, hahahaha ^_^
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August 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love your story! Your depiction of Harry and Severus' budding relationship is amazing. I can't believe English isn't your native language considering you write better than the majority of English-speaking writers. I'll be looking forward to the next chapter!
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August 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
You have given me quite an education as well as an interesting story. I'm glad you don't have your protagonists jumping into a sexual situation on the first page and actually take the time to develop a story line. I'm looking forward to reading more.
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August 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
lol poor minerva, that scene was so well done! and poor snape's patience has got to be wearing thin, but at least he has ron to take it out on now. another great chapter :)
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August 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
is it just me or does Min's care of her lions seem a bit slip shod.
We know Sev has patience... he wouldn't be able to brew if he didn't.
i look forward to seeing what hell is going to drop on ickle Ronnikins. Even more so if Molly and the twins learn of his behavior. Not acceptable in any way, size, shape or form.
I wish sev good luck with his Lion cub taming. It'll be twice as hard since his cub comes to him so badly damaged and mishandled. Gaining his trust would be the most important step and i think Sev is well on the way to doing that.
something also tells me that the Dursleys have some serious karma owing and sev just might be the one to nudge it on it's way. I lay bets that har is never going back there again.
I'm glad Sev has excused har from classes too. It's not like har would have been in any fit state to absorb knowledge anyway. I'm honestly surprised he's done as well as he has. This will also give Sev and har a chance to bond and lay a stable base for the relationship.
We know Sev has patience... he wouldn't be able to brew if he didn't.
i look forward to seeing what hell is going to drop on ickle Ronnikins. Even more so if Molly and the twins learn of his behavior. Not acceptable in any way, size, shape or form.
I wish sev good luck with his Lion cub taming. It'll be twice as hard since his cub comes to him so badly damaged and mishandled. Gaining his trust would be the most important step and i think Sev is well on the way to doing that.
something also tells me that the Dursleys have some serious karma owing and sev just might be the one to nudge it on it's way. I lay bets that har is never going back there again.
I'm glad Sev has excused har from classes too. It's not like har would have been in any fit state to absorb knowledge anyway. I'm honestly surprised he's done as well as he has. This will also give Sev and har a chance to bond and lay a stable base for the relationship.
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August 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
and again the reviewing didn't work, *sigh*
well, I was just telling you that I love how protective and how posessive Severus is over Harry and that I love the way he is taking his education into his hands
well, I was just telling you that I love how protective and how posessive Severus is over Harry and that I love the way he is taking his education into his hands
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August 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
somehow I never know if I should laugh at this chapter or if I should be sad because of it. There are definitely funny parts in it but generally, it's sad that Ron is such a git. I just hope that he will re-think some things
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August 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
what a git Ron is, but I've known this already
love this fic still
love this fic still