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for I just wanted to ask

by evil-minded

person delia cerrano
schedule October 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Still reading.. still liking. I hope Snape is strong enough to not let Albus disrespect him & throw him to Voldemore leaving Harry at the mercy of Albus (He is not to be trusted) Ron, Hermione & the rest.
schedule October 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
it's a good thing snape has previous experience in dealing with damaged kids. As subs go, hell as anyone goes, har is very, very damaged. He will need a lot to build him back up. on the plus side though, he does trust snape and that will be very important. Trust is vital to any relationship but incredibly more so with a D/s or bdsm kind of relationship.
I know dumbles was a little short on choices but he seriously owes har for dumping him with those monsters.
person delia cerrano
schedule September 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I just discovered your wonderful story. What a complicated special relationship they are creating! Harry & Snape have had such a horrible history and deserve to find love and safety. I hope they discover & realize it with each other very soon. Then we can see Snape make everyone jump & run to punish those that have been so mean, hateful & just uncaring of a young unprotected boy all his life including his so called friends & teachers. Waiting anxiously for the next chapter.
person Markhal
schedule September 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Such a great chapter as usual! And the secret is out! What a intense chapter... I was just glued to the screen of my computer until the last word. Harry and Severus really are kind of "amants maudits". I think one time there is hope for their relationship and the next time I just want to cry because for each step forward they do three steps backwards. It is frustrating bit, eh, aren't all the relationships a bit like that? I like how Severus mentally refused to go to Harry's friends because "Severus doesn't care!" As if. We know, Sev, that you are totally enthralled by Harry! Don't go all Big Bad Potion Master on us! Aha. Thank you for the chapter!
schedule September 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
hmmm... Harry has something to tell and even we don't know it yet. That means we have to guess. It could be that Harry wants to tell Severus how much he hates being called boy and why... or something more sinister about his relatives. I'm hoping for the 'boy' conversation. Looking forward to more chapters to feed me :)
person YaoiGirl
schedule September 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for another great update! I love this story!

Poor Harry! At first I was sure that the Durleys was in the supermarket, and that Snape just didn't realise that it was them, and that they were the reason for Harry's strange behaviour, but then you explained it and I really felt sorry for him! Poor boy! And it makes sense too! With the Dursleys constantly telling him he's a freak and all they probably would teach him to stay out of peoples' way in public as well as at home.

And then the shopping for clothes and the food - I wonder if he'll tell Snape that he doesn't like fish? And I wonder how Snape will react if he does?

Oh, the headache! I swear I got a headache myself reading that (in a you-write-very-good-way, not in a bad way). I felt so sorry for Harry! And Snape too actually, because I think that at this point he's starting to get a bit overwelmed as well. Poor man can't even sleep because he's worried about Harry.

Anyway, thank you again for an amazing chapter!
person unneeded
schedule September 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
well, you can say sev is learning lots about har without having to ask. I have a feeling the Dursleys aren't going to enjoy the fall out at all. Har has my sympathy. Imagine being overloaded by the simple task of picking clothes or food. Sev has a LOT of work to do for and with har. He's a mess.
I want to hear what har was thinking too. trust has to start somewhere after all.
schedule September 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
hmm, and here it starts - I have forgotten about how much fun this story is, how deep it is and how sensual ... I'd love you to continue this story in ff, but I of course understand why you don't dare to ... looking forwards to the next chapters of it
schedule September 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I've never read an author who managed writing such a "harmless" scene like the one in this chapter and yet managing to write it so deep so that I shiver with alone the thought of it, a masterpiece truly and I expectantly await future chapters
schedule September 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love the pacing of this story. The word delicious comes to mind. I just want to eat this story up and savor it at the same time.