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a sad chapter, but it shows what child abuse does to a child
great work, really
on to the next chapter

I know how difficult such a chapter surely had to be, but you've managed really well
loved it

that was such a sweet chapter, the care both feel for each other, even Harry caring for Severus despite that it should be the other way round
I loved it and I am really looking forwards to the next chapter

awww, poor thing. at least he's finally starting to trust sev with the truth, now if he'll just let sev help him in return. another wonderful chapter, keep up the good work :)

I agree with Steve, nice to have some actions started
loved the chappy :D

that was a very long and complicated chapter, but it was worth the read, I've nearly cried

what a chapter (glares at Sera) it's a great chapter and a great story and I love it, and I think, you have described the reactions from an abused child very well, keep up your way of writing!

want more! I'Ve run out of next-buttons
hope it's soon friday, great chappy again

and come to think of it where does Ron want to go "out" with Harry to?? They are not allowed to leave the grounds except on Hogsmead weekends for the afternoon. So where exactly would they "go out " to? The forbidden forest to...look at the trees? Hagrids? But then he would have said that. Maybe its because the wording is strange but in english you only say you want to " go out" with somebody if you want to go on a date...

So far I am up to chapter 4 and from what I am reading you are doing a really good job. Even your grammer and spelling is very good for a 2nd language speaker/writer of english. I did notice you used teh word hair instead of heir and teh phrase " sacked together " which isn't a english phrase( Are you german? " Er sackte zusammen" perhaps?) . I like that you are taking it slowly and letting Harry discover things at his own pace. I do question Severus as to why he would assume to tell Harry about BDSM when all Harry asked for was a basic sex lesson. Could have been done in 10 minutes really and there was no reason to assume Harry would even be interested in BDSM and teh pain aspect at that point. But I guess you have to get there at some point so this was okay. I really really dislike the point that harry thinks his friends only like him for the fame. I mean thats like you just looked at teh entire Harry Potter series and said Fuck you :( The whole series is about friendship and teh prevailing power of love. I find it incredibly hard to believe that the harry from the books is the one in this story saying evrybody thinks he's a freak and his friends only like him for the fame. I mean sure, some people probably do think that but we have never had any reason to believe his friends are not the pillars of support and love they are in teh books. You are not the only author who has done this but it is really a cheap and easy way out and from the quality and depth of your writing I expected more...