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Ah cliffy, Good job Bravo bravo i loved all of it. I was sitting on the edge of my seat the whole time while reading this i was so sucked into the story i kind of screamed/growled when it ended there *sighs happily* I cant wait for the next chapter Continue giving us the awesome work that is yours *bows low*

NOOOOO A CLIFFY AHHH, but I'm glad to see another chapter up. I won't say much because if people read the comments first i don't wanna ruin it for them so i will say good job i loved it but i cant wait for the next update take care and i hope to see one soon.

I'm really happy to see another chapter, I was wondering if you were okay and didn't forget about writing more of this Awesome story. I have this on bookmark so i can see when another one has been updated, But really i love it the story is beautiful not just all happy happy but it has it dark moments. But i feel sorry for Severus and Remus having to spend so much time apart and Severus cant be with Remus during the full moon, instead he has to see Dora with his love knowing she has a thing for him. But i cant wait to see the next update and keep up the Beautiful work.

(sorry if my Review seems a bit meh i have not been to sleep yet so its a little bland)

I Love it i cant wait for the next chapter to come out, I have been following and bookmarking the page so i can check to see if there is a new one out, The story is really deep and i feel sorry for Snape having to keep so much from the one he loves and fearing what will come at the end. I don't want to say to MUCH so i don't spoil it for others that will want to read this and look at the comments before they began the story so keep up the awesome work.

I absolutely love your story. I usually come to this website for pure smut/ PWP stories, but this story is not only smutty but has a real heart and such a well thought out plot. I don't know if you've addressed this yet but I'm begging you to not let Snape or Remus die in the end as in cannon. Our heros of this story need a happy ending after so much heartache, and listen to me...I'm emotionally invested in your characters, which really speaks to you as a writer. Hoping for a HEA.

And seriously?! This is the amount of reviews this story has gotten?! Wow this is a cold site. I hope you don't take the amount (the pitiful amount) of reviews you are getting personally. You are a terrific author and I hope your posting elsewhere as well...somewhere were readers are more demonstrative and thankful...And to the readers of AFF who may be reading this story and not reviewing...Shame on you! Review the stories you love! We don't have to pay for this entertainment. Authors do it all for the enjoyyment of writing and practicing their writing skills. They deserve some positive feedback from us. Sorry little rant on my part. Keep it up. Hopefully you'll get more reviews as time goes on.

Call it crul, but I really wish Severus would beat up Tonks lol. Awesome work!

This is such an intense plot! You're doing an amazing job with weaving both your own ideas and actual literature from the novels. I am curious to see how you adjust the ending of the books to your own writing. Indeed, I was surprised that you still killed off Sirius but alas, it had to be done. I will keep following this story until the very end, I can only hope that Remus and Severus stay together!

I think I can see where this is going and I really hope that I'm wrong. I would hate to see something as desolate as that occur. Please tell me that you will not be following cannon to the best of your ability. I understand that you have been working within the events so far, but I fear that the end of this fiction will be that Dumbledore refuses to let Snape tell Lupin. Lupin believes that Snape truly betrayed and murdered Dumbledore and decides to let Tonks have her way after the discussion in the hospital wing. The two of them are legally married but now soul bound, which Snape finds out about from the jibes made by the dark lord to the Malfoy's and Bella when the Muggle Studies teacher is being tortured over the table set up in the Drawing Room of Malfoy Manor. Snape will only hang on to make sure his unbreakable vow for Lily is fulfilled. Teddy is conceived and birthed only adding to Snape's agony. The battle comes to Hogwarts after Snape delivers the sword of Gryffindor to Harry, Snape fly's away, meets the dark lord, gets bitten by the snake in the shreaking shack, which already has horrid memories linked to it. He gives his memories to Harry and resigned to die because he no longer has a reason to live. Remus and Tonks both die in the battle and Harry never learns of the love between the two because everyone that knew about it besides Bill will be dead. Hmm, maybe he will find out from Bill. Anyway, I really hope you don't follow that path. Perhaps you could have Remus admit that he doesn't feel the same way about Tonks. Perhaps Snape can actually tell Remus about the deal with Dumbledore, or perhaps Remus could go back to their flat not wanting to believe that things were as they appear. They meet and talk before that summer. Perhaps they both survive the battle of Hogwarts, perhaps Snape carries the antidote to Nagini's venom or Lupin senses his need or Tippy comes to his rescue. Lupin seems to be a much stronger dueler than Jo's cannon version so perhaps he will live. If you do the whole Lupin marries Tonks arch or Teddy is concieved, then she could always still die and have the other two survive leaving Snape and Lupin to raise him before Snape carries their second son.

Well! I read your story all the way through in one sitting. Then I looked at the number of reviews you've gotten and was really saddened by the lack of attention/love you've gotten. So I had to write and let you know that this is really good! Seriously! I've been reading fanfiction since the early days of SycophantHex.com and Severus has always been a quiet obsession. You are writing a good, well written story with great character interpretation and really hot sex...Woot! The fact that you're even mostly keeping to cannon (big picture) is excellent and amazing! Well done! That said, please don't stop. I can't wait to see where this is all going and look forward to the next installment.
Your new fan,
melankali