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for You Will Not Kiss Me

by Prosperosdaughter

person Aidenn
schedule November 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! Seriously, it's the best thing I've ever read. I can't waaaaiiiitttt for Severus to be pregnant! I'm basically dying in anticipation! Keep up the great work!!
person Snow
schedule October 31, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh god. This is the last chapter! What the hell am I going to do with my time now?! I've been reading this for a week straight, I am OBSESSED in the best possible way!

Oh I sincerely hope you update regularly because I love this story so much. Hell if you update for reviews I will review everyday!!!
person Snow
schedule October 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wow I'm really surprised at how few reviews you have. This is a wonderful and beautiful story. As well done as Rowling herself, if I may add. It continuously has my heart racing as I fidget in my seat in excitement. You are definitely a wonderful writer and I hope to find out that you have written many other stories when I finish this one!
person Snow
schedule October 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
AHHHHH! BONDING TIME FOR SIRIUS AND SEVERUS!!! asldfkjsfkalk. Tis adorable and heartwarming and I will snuggle-fuck it to death!
person cLaWs
schedule October 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
cant wait cant wait your so awesome cant wait cant wait.
person delia cerrano
schedule October 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I sure hope it works. Snape & Remus are so good together & have been through so much! It's time for them to be together &
forget everyone else...especially that two timing, dishonest, user, creep of a poseur Dombledore!!!
person cLaWs
schedule October 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Great job i can't wait for the next chapter, I would say more but don't want to ruin it for those who have not read the chapter just yet. But Continue with the great work you are an artist with words ♥♥♥♥♥☺.
person delia cerrano
schedule October 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I think I reviewed already but I wanted to say I REALLY REALLY don't want Remus to take Tonks as a 2nd mate. I would HATE HATE HATE that so much. I don't care how much she cares or needs him! Severus & Remus have something special & have had such harsh backgrounds it would wound what they have so deeply...change it and cheat them of the deep sweet love that they've always missed out on. Tonks is young yet & wasn't with David for a great long time so she can find someone else. Pleaseeee. I know it's only a story but Remus/Sev have such need & understanding of each other have gone thru so much...
schedule October 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Love this story so much! I was so ecstatic to see you had updated! It's so weird, because it's not my usual pairing, but I'm so in love with this story!
person delia cerrano
schedule October 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Took me 3 days but I read this whole story. It is grand! I can't wait for more. You have some imagination & a fine writing ability. To even remember all the small details, characters & their histories!! I love the Snape/Lupin love story...so close yet so far. It is killing me! Please get them together soon...I can't take much more pain for them.
And don't even get me started on Dumbledore! I wouldn't trust him an inch not even a half inch! He has it in for Snape
& Lupin to a lesser degree. I think he only uses Harry as a pawn..sort of an unwitting pawn. Anyway please continue ASAP for my blood pressure sake.