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Ok that's it!! 96 chapters & my poor Severus STILL is being asked to sacrifice and I still think Dombledore is Still a miserable sneaky rat and TOTALLY unfair to Severus & Remus. Remus will never understand because Dombledore will find some reason that Severus shouldn't tell him. Remus will think Severus is really giving their bond. That will give Tonks the chance she is waiting for...the bond really breaks and my heart too!!! Maybe that skunk, Dombledore, will probably insist it's "for the greater good" that Remus stay with Tonks so she can take care of him! That would really finish it off!! Then Dombledore will have finished off Remus & Severus (and totally P.O'd. me)

I have this AWFUL feeling that Lupin is going to give in. Poor Severus he can't ever catch a break & have someone & something for himself!!

Yow! What almost happened to the bond between Snape & Lupin! I absolutely hate that Snape is supposed to kill Harry & Dumbledore.
It's just not fair (stamping foot). And especially that he can't tell Lupin about it...that REALLY stinks!!!

I read this mammoth of a piece straight in just a few days. To say that I'm hooked to your writing is an understatement. I absolutely LOVE how you weave actual quotes/storylines into your own work so seamlessly. When Severus mentioned it had been four years since the Thrall I was like, dang, four years have past by in this story?? I'm on tenderhooks to see how Remus will react to Severus killing Dumbledore. Sev and Remus' relationship is exquisite and real and you make your readers feel what they're feeling so perfectly. Since you've traversed so much time already in the story, I'm going to assume that your story will continue until the end of Book 7 events. I just hope and pray you won't kill off Severus and Remus in the Final Battle. Because to go through all of that just to end up dead and not have their happy ever after with kids in the future... ugh. That would slay me (and probably most, if not all, your other readers too!)

Anyway, this review is a jumbled mess of a few things I'm thinking. Amazing work. I love your characters and the way you tell a story. Keep going!!

I almost shed a few tears on this chapter. You have such a wonderful story here. I love it to death and I hope whenever you finish it that you allow people to copy it for personal use (kindle).

Keep up the amazing work!

Please please please fix it...so much angst, so very unfair to poor Severus and Lupin. And if it turns out that Sev has to see Dumbledore killed & Harry killed (or appear to be killed) how will he ever live with it or allow Lupin near him.

Dombledore is SO unfair to Lupin & Snape! Everyone & everything seems more important than they are. Now what horror is he planning to trap them in while he smiles & twinkles & twists it into someone else's fault.

I don't know about Snape & Lupin but I can't take much more of Tonks interferring with them making that softy Lupin just about decide that giving up Snape for her to please everyone is more important than their love. Also either Snape or Lupin trusting Albus one inch! He plays on their loyalty & sense of what's right with no care for them nor does he value them or give them credit for their very real feelings for each other. They can't even acknowledge each other for Pete's sake! Enough already!! How about they win for a change & Tonks gets put in her place & Albus does too. It would really relieve my blood pressure & my dread when I see another chapter come in...it's so very sad when they get dumped on again & have to stand aside for everyone & everything like they are garbage. How do you think your love can feel when you are forced to stand there silent?

Wooh! An update! And only a few days after I finished the first 89 chapters to boot!

You have a wonderful story here. I love how well it intertwines with the books. You take the slightest detail in the books and give a reason for why it was so in your story. I can't wait to see what you come up with next. Although I am EXTREMELY anxious about Dumbledore's death and the repercussions!

Still horrified by the thought of a second mate!!! Please no...after everything they've been through? How they feel about each other-like the other half of each other? They wouldn't be the same..eventually they would fall apart because for sure Snape couldn't live with it and Lupin would feel the difference.. would feel ike he was "less" because he had cheapened his love for Snape by taking another mate.