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for You Will Not Kiss Me

by Prosperosdaughter

schedule January 31, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This is my LONG overdue review, I apologise for that. I started this story months ago, ended up having to read it over from the beginning to my last stopping point because my memory has been messed up since an accident I was in. It was just as heart wrenching the second time around, especially when I caught up.

Every time I read this story I brace for impact because I know it will never fail to pull on my heartstrings.

I really do enjoy your writing style and the incorporation of the direct quotations.

Sorry for not reviewing up till now, I've been too busy rushing to the next chapter to leave a review
person delia cerrano
schedule January 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I'm in a deep sad sad sad mood for Snape & Lupin! You aren't really going to let them break their bond are you? You couldn't be that cruel to them (or to your faithful reader)...they've been so lonely and betrayed all their lives...unloved by those that should have loved them. What Tonks calls love is a sick thing from losing her boyfriend and won't last under real life when she finds out what Lupin is really like & that he doesn't forget the love of his life so easily. Snape will always be between them.
person qwerty
schedule January 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
AHHH! You're still killing me. Those letters Remus writes! :( I know you say to trust you but everything looks so bleak for Remus and Sev! I have a feeling that this is only the beginning and things will get so much worse...

Great chapter. Your writing is amazing as always. Keep going!
person cLaWs
schedule January 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
YAY i missed reading your story, but now i have another chapter to read YAYYY SO HAPPY....sorry had two cupcakes today....anyway i loved it even tho it was sooooo sad to see that happen to those two stupid dumassdor those poor dears *sigh* dont wanna say to much because others might not of read the new chapter yet and i dont wanan spoil it even tho i want to howl out my rage etc etc but i loved it all of it and i can't wait for the next update ahh this is ganna kill me.
person mary blackman
schedule January 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
i loved this story if you do an update or sequel lease send me the link to it thank you
person delia cerrano
schedule January 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This is just too too tragic!!! I can't stand reading it word for word anymore. I just skim it. That rotten horrible insane old man with no humanity in him. And that Tonks!!! It all just goes to show how good a story teller you are.
But please help Severus & Lupin (and me).
person qwerty
schedule January 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This is so painful to read!! :( I really hope that Severus and Remus can be together soon but I know this is only the beginning of their separation.... so sad!!
person Felicia
schedule January 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I am so in love with this story!!! I can't wait for an update.
person delia cerrano
schedule January 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Stupid I Know but I don't know if I can read any more of this. It is too much! Poor poor Severus and Remus? He will think Severus betrayed him, didn't love him...& don't get me started on Tonks & Dumbledor@#%!!%@ The story has come to this & I can't think of a way out. Dombledore & Tonks will win & get what they want. Remus is such a softy He'll believe everything they tell him and when Tonks pulls her oh woe is me he'll give in...the rat well mouse! and my poor baby Severus is left out in the cold as usual..alone with his PAINFUL memories. If not dead
he soon will be from the heartbreak.
person qwerty
schedule January 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
NOOOO! That was the most painful chapter yet! Please find a way that they can be together. After everything Severus has to let him go AND Tonks will replace him? Too much, too much. It'll break both of them! And for Dumbledore to order Severus to lie to Remus about the reason why... I wish Severus wasn't so broken so he would realize Remus will love him no matter what he has done in the past.