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for You Will Not Kiss Me

by Prosperosdaughter

person Anon
schedule April 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Please please find a way to get Tonks out of the picture! She's so despicable!
person qwerty
schedule April 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
**deep sigh of relief**
person delia cerrano
schedule April 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I still hate Tonks!!! And now there is a baby??? And Tonks can call herself Mrs Lupin!!! Fix it please. Otherwise what good is all their great pure never ending love & their bonds. They will have given up everything. The "bad guys" will win.
person FAYEROSE
schedule April 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
URGHHH!!!! You cannot let Tonks get away with this! Hell, I'l hex her myself. I hope Snape and Lupin have their child. Truthfully have never cared for Tonks or Teddy.
person qwerty
schedule March 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOOOOOOOO. That ending, ahhhhh! Dang ok so Teddy is still happening in your story... I really hope that doesn't mean Severus and Remus will still die at the end (my eternal question lol)

Yes we finally get the big story out of Severus and see Remus forgive him. But now I'm SUPER curious as to Remus' story. Ah the suspense!

Great chapter. Keep going!!
person Hadriannais
schedule March 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Amazing. Simply amazing. Your ability to weave your story into the storyline of the books, and stay true it is an amazing gift. You literally had me in tears by the end of the chapter. I can't wait till your next update.
person Blackjettz
schedule March 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
hi
Firstly this is a fantastic story & secondly I would like to ask your permission to post a link to your story on our blog.
Blackjettz.blogspot.com
We think its a fantastic story and would like to review it there.

Please let us know by emailing Shayne
Shayne.a.black@gmail.com

Thanks BJ
person cLaWs
schedule March 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I CAN'T WAIT AHH its going to kill me i love you and this story, its so sad and i really hope Lupin learns the truth about what happen and Sev can have his love back....oooooooooooooooo the wait but i shall hold onto my little thread of sanity for my Favorite story.
person cLaWs
schedule March 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
It makes me sad reading how Severus is so down about losing his Remus, Its like when i read it i can feel all his emotions and it brings me to tears. When they were happy so was i but when things went sour i got angry then i got sad and when you can feel what they feel that means your a damn kickass writing and i hope you never stop writing.

Keep up the awesome work♠
person Loba
schedule March 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Very few stories have been able to keep me so enraptured! I'm definitely "enthralled" by it, although I curse you for making me cry so much! :D