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for You Will Not Kiss Me

by Prosperosdaughter

person Peahen
schedule July 21, 2018 at 12:00 AM

I have searched far and wide for more than 116 chapters of this and 20 of Old Friends.  I love your development of of the relationships and how skillfully you mesh your completely original and interesting background story with the original storyline.  I love your AB~IL story and the pack so much, too.  I am sad that this appears abandoned.  So well done!  However, I can only imagine that perhaps  the deaths of the two tragic lovers in the original work stalls this fiction as you work to avoid it :-)  Well, we all must dream.  Thank you for your time and efforts writing these stories.

person Megan Moore
schedule June 19, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Absolution amazing story, one of the best Severus Snapes stories that I have ever read! I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Thank you so much for writing this x
person delia cerrano
schedule February 17, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I'm reading and still crying and sooo sad that Remus and Severus are suffering and so scared for each other. And then there's that pregnant Tonks who is so bad hanging onto Remus when she knows he doesn't really want her...that rotten Dumbledore. I get so aggravated that my poor Remus/Severus are suffering sooo long!!
person delia cerrano
schedule November 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I don't even know how he can stand upright ...poor Severus!!! They are never going to have each other and peace.
person atty
schedule October 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I had originally found this story last year and decided that I didn't like it after a few chapters, but I decided to give it a second chance and OH MY GOD I am in love with this story! I haven't been able to stop reading it and I'm actually glad now that I waited a whole year to come back to it, I was able to read soooooo many chapters!! And can I just say that this is one of THE BEST fics I've ever read and it's just so captivating and wonderful and I cannot express it in words.
Please please please keep up the AMAZING work
And I'm also sorry about your friend.
person delia cerrano
schedule September 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh Noooo!!! Not that Dora again!!! PLEAZE do something I don't see how they will survive another go around with her nasty selfish wicked self and I know I won't!!! I may have to skip a few chpts or only read the last paragraph. I can't stand the constant angst she always brings with her. She almost makes me believe in abortion. Severus & Remus are sooo good and they have suffered so much from miserable growing up years & others attitudes until they found each other then Dumbledore....don't even get me started on that EVIL man!!
person delia cerrano
schedule July 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This continues to be so sad so tragic!! Yet here I am still reading hoping for a happy ending, respite, Tonks out of the picture?
person qwerty
schedule June 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
So now Remus begins to get a taste of what Severus has been enduring all along :/ but at least they have each other now! Eager to see more how Severus acts during the school year. Great chapter! Keep going!!
person delia cerrano
schedule June 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Are Severus and Remus never to have any peace and honor? I can't tell you how sad your letting that horrible Tonks be pregnant and still trying to steal Remus makes me...allowing everyone think she is goody two shoes and Remus is garbage!! No one should have to suffer as much as they have.
person delia cerrano
schedule May 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
After all this time I can't believe that even with Dumbledore dead (and good riddance) Severance & Remus can't get the peace and contentment they deserve & have earned! Can't there be some people that believe in them and help them for a change?