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for Harry Potter And The Brand New Life

by Darksword

person Akuma
schedule January 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Unfortunately she wasn't as open minded as he would have liked, only rarely agreeing to have a threesome with another girl when they were alive. Of course, she was a bit more open minded now, and they were currently enjoying spending time with Selene Lovegood.
If he went with other guys she may have been more open to the idea. Sirius would not have minded lol.

Hope you continue this! While some things are...tacky/overdone you write it in a very presentable manner. Hope to see the Black Sisters involved (Nym is included)...and if at all possible Lily being involved would be awesome. She is bonded with harry already (different bond but ehh) and Harry will become the Master of Death. That would arguably give him the power of True Resurrection. In canon he loses the stone and seals the Elder Wand. Most likely together he could resurrect the dead fully.

person Akuma
schedule January 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
With Selene being saved does that mean the threesomes never happened with her and the Potters? If they still did would that make her an adulterous? Reason I am asking because from what you ave written her magic/the family magic would make her life very painful.

Is Lin a widow, divorced, or a loose woman? Will she join Harry's bed as a second grouping wife?

'Alright, it's agreed, the two of them need to die? And as painfully as we can manage?'
Might I suggest death by Basilisk Venom?
person ferret9
schedule November 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Please continue this story!
One of the best I've read!
person Jt
schedule August 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ok at the risk of sounding like a fanatic this a great story I've read the 2 chaps 3 times over please update.
person GodOfAll
schedule August 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon.
person JT
schedule August 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Great stroy so far i like the plot twist from the original please update soon.
person Anon
schedule July 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Nice start.
I hope to see more of this story soon.
person GodOfAll
schedule June 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon.
person zamkotje
schedule June 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
An extremely good story so far, I can't wait to see how things develop. (Currently ch. 2)

All too many writers put a hate on Ginny when they make another girl Harry's girlfriend/alpha. But I do like how your version has the girl's working together ( of course that trust is inherent in the soulbond)
schedule June 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
👏👍👍👍Omg!!! I love this please keep going ! The only thing I'm not too happy with Ginny still being in Harry's life 😖:-( I hate Harry and Ginny together in any way !
😍I'm all for Harry and Cho ! I would have love for them to been together in the series. ☺