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for Debt Relief, Malfoy Style

by tbird1965

person Ontrose
schedule June 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Loving reading Debt Relief again, I'm so glad that I found you as I was devastated to discover you gone from fanfiction :) Just wondering if your going to post Snape's Room in the Basement here, as its my favorite :) Your Awesome.
schedule June 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
5 new chapters? You spoil us.

Apart from the fact that Victoire does not always act like a toddler (mainly when she tries to get the door to open) and that Lucius is using words she would never understand, I really loved their interaction! Lucius never striked me as the fatherly type (in a way that he's good with children) but it works here. However I don't think Narcissa would have let the house-elves take care of Draco, since we know that she pampered him.

Loved the interaction with Molly as well. My, I would appreciate just-out-of-bed-Lucius in my kitchen just like Molly. And seeing how serious he is, sure helps her open up to him dating Ginny.

(btw, I couldn't review the other day (something with too many reviews already done in one day) but might I just thank you for going in the same direction as my mind did? The swimmingpool scene was brilliant and oh I can totally understand Draco's shock on walking in on something like that haha. The truth or dare thing was also very much appreciated :))
schedule June 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I know there's OOC'ness in this story but Minerva is even more out of character than anything I've seen so far.
It did like Abracus though, lol.
schedule June 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Enjoying the story so far! You have a great way of building up tension (literally..). They are a rather unlikely couple, but you manage to make them work well.
And I've never been on a motorbike before, but if that's what it feels like... I guess I should try that out soon, lol.
schedule June 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
You might want to add that the story is (slightly) AU/OOC but that never harmed anyone ;-) On to read more!
schedule June 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
My my, Ginny sure is a lucky gal ;-)
schedule June 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
My, I was just checking how many more chapters you had up. 20! I'm only barely over the first half of the story! That is really worth looking forward to, there is some (a lot) OOC'ness (mobile phones, tvs and computers I can handle, but the Facebook page seems a bit overdoing it) but overall I'm greatly enjoying this. Ginny and Hermione are very lucky indeed.
schedule June 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
How bad of me is it to secretly hope that Lucius 'fixing' things ends up with the four of them on a very large fourposter bed? I just had that image in my mind during this chapter and I really hope we'll see that happen in the (very near) future. *wicked grin*

person Tkitty21
schedule June 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I found this story a couple of days ago and i haven't been able to stop reading it. I like how many chapters you update at a time and tonight i was just reading them as you updated one after the other. I can't wait for more chapters to be posted.
person piksi
schedule June 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I found this story last week and I couldn't stop reading it! This is amazing, normally I don't read Lucius/Ginny pairing but this one is fantastic.
You did a very great job! They both are perfect and sexy together.