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Awesome story! Thank you!

I really enjoyed reading this, I like how it advanced slowly and seem almost natural. I can't wait to see what comes next I feel like awkwardness would ensue but that's completely up to you.

I love where this is going! I finally caught up with the last chapter, and hopefully, we'll be reading about the dancing evening very soon.
Keep up the good work!
(A message to Pansy: go fall from a cliff and take Ron with you kthxbai ^p^ )

Great story so far!! It fits very well and pleases. I do hope you update it soon, and I really like your skills and your imagination!!

I just came across your story and I wanted to let you know that I absolutely love it so far! I can't wait to read what happens next! :-)

Hmm....I do believe Ron just broke up with Hermione. I wonder how that will play into things tomorrow at work with Draco?
Can't wait to find out!
p.s. sad turn of events that muggle children essentially "die" upon entering Hogwarts. Interesting idea though---can't say I've heard that one before! :)
Thanks for posting! I look forward to the next chapter--I agree, this one ended rather abruptly.
Cheers,
SW

Hello. After reading all three chapters, I must say, I like it so far! I like that he's not completely changed yet, that's she's tired of being in the limelight and saddled with nothing but expectations. I am glad she broke up with Ron, even if it was a mistake, so that she can move on, and that you didn't write him as a ass or idiot. I hope they can regain their friendship somehow, too. I look forward to more really soon! HG4eva

I like this! I'm not familiar with the song you've loosely based this on but I am enjoying the set up you've begun with Draco and Hermione (poster children for Muggle-born Witch and Centuries-Old Wizard) being the ones to inform young children and their families of their magical capabilities. That dynamic is bound to be rife with opportunities to delve into more personal aspects of their lives---for example, simply the story about how Hermione's parents took the news of her magical genes was one step closer in the relationship between the two. More intimate, shall we say. I'm looking forward to reading about how their relationship/friendship/romance??! develops.
I am also very pleased to read a story with a proper structure and format. Kudos to you (Or your beta) for that. It is appreciated by this reader. It's so disappointing to me to have to abandon a perfectly good story idea due to poor grammar, spelling, or structure.
I look forward to the next chapter!
Regards,
SW

This story really intrigues me! I'm interested to see how feelings develop on either side, especially since Ron is still in te picture
Romantically. I like that there is a lot of plot outside of te dramione relationship. I find that this always makes fictions better. I look forward to seeing where you go with this :) well done so far and update soon!

Yay, I'm lovely ^^
Anyway, second chapter didn't disappoint. I love Hermione's tired bitterness, and Draco's cynicism, and how they explain perfectly why both of them would take the job. Especially why Hermione would go herself.
Flawless writing, a pinch of humour now and then (poor confused muggle parents, I hope we'll see more of them), Draco and Hermione partners on a challenging mission ==> more, please! And may Pansy break a leg or something. No, I'm kidding, poor Pansy, I actually like what we've seen of her relationship wish Draco so far.