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May 8, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Its good. But its all in 1 big paragraph which makes it hard to read.
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March 28, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Did you know your story is in one big paragraph? Makes it confusing to read so I didn't even bother, which is a shame since your summary made it seem interesting.
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January 10, 2014 at 12:00 AM
OH my gosh. Did you really upload this as one big mess, or did AFF mess with you. I can't even begin to read this as it is, you should have seen my face when I saw it! Oh the horror. Please, please, PLEASE! Can you please fix it? I really do want to read this, but as it is I can't! My eyes unfocus and I get a headache looking at the tangled words on the screen.
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October 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This is currently unreadable. I'd be glad to read it once the formatting is fixed.
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February 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Sry but the formatting makes this inreadable. Just a chunk of text without any paragraphs.
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October 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
....You do realize your story is just ONE giant paragraph right? If you ever decide to edit it and put it into correct (or at least semi-correct) formatting I will happily read your story but since I will only continusely lose my spot, get confused, and get extrenly annoyed if I read it as it is. I won't... If you don't feel like editing it yourself, get a beta to do it for you.
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July 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I would have liked to have read your story, except I will not torture myself trying to read something that isn't edited or formatted correctly!! Do yourself and your readers a favor put a double space between paragraphs and make sure your puncuation is correct!!
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July 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
There is absolutely no way to read this, there are no paragraphs, no wat to even tell where your author's note ends and the story begins. It could be the most brilliant story out there, but I can not even attempt to read it again without some editing.