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Please make more and please dont make us wait as long as you did for this one!

Hmm, I wonder who's acting as Luna...I first thought maybe Bella, since she is crazy enough, but I doubt Bella would be able to keep her head like that for so long. Perhaps Pansy's mom? We don't know what side she's on, after all, Pansy is 'neutral' (meaning Harry/Draco's side) but her dad is with Moldy Shorts (how come no one mentioned that when Siri said it? I laughed by the way). Really, Harry needs to pay attention more to what Luna says and not have his 'flash of insight' or whatever you want to call it after the fact. Good story so far, I've always loved the movie Labyrinth, interesting twist so far. Keep up the good work, look forward to more!

Leania

Oh no!!! Was that potion Dumbledore made him take really what they claimed it was? What was in that juice? Is Harry okay? Did they get Draco too?

All for Har and Draco taking on home schooling to keep them from getting dead, raise your hands. *watches my hand go up. Seriously, you'd think har would no better than to just drink what was offered before checking now. I mean voldi AND dumbles are after him of course. How else would a D.E. get onto hogwarts grounds.

ch. 24 is awesome. love it.

well, now and then filler chappies are needed. And it did impart a lot of needed info... so, how long are you going to let sev and siri splash about in Egyptian rivers before they actually get together? Damn, Siri is fun. Exasperating, but fun. i imagine he'll drive Sev round the bend on a regular basis. ^^

Oh I love it!!!!!

Shouldn't this be in the crossovers category?

In chapter 23, you have too much bondage. Now, I love a good bit of bondage, but this one defies even the laws of magic. First you have Harry blinded and bound on his back by his spread ankles and wrists. Then Draco tells him to roll over and get on his knees, and he dose, with no spell to cancel the first bindings, and gets bound on his knees. On his knees, the rest makes sense, but the first binding doesn't.

Also, there are some out of place words during the orgasm.

Other then that, for the past year, Lucius has been dancing around my head in skin tight velvet pants, knee high boots, and a loose Fabio style peasant shirt singing "Magic Dance" in the great hall, so I'm glad not to be the only one to see the correlation between him and the Goblin King, and have enjoyed reading so far.

Love the chapter, Love the story, and I'd like more Sev/Siri action. *wink*