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Sirius & Severus are fun together! Glad Draco & Harry are back together. That sneaky Hufflepuff though needs to realize he is being used big time and will only be left holding the bag.

ch 18- lmao i love how the friends automatically start planning for robes and masks and designs when the idea of world domination pops up. i loved it when harry's friends did it and i loved it when draco's did it (especially the little bit about theo looking all sad when harry made them stop) *giggles madly and goes back to reading*

I read all 31 chapters in just under 12 hours. And I'm in love. I have no criticism for you, constructive or destructive. I just love it. And I have to tell you that I will hunt you down and kiss you if you introduce a bit of Sev/Siri action into this. Because while that is not a match I ever thought of working you've managed to write it in a way that it's appealing to me. I can't wait until your next update and you are favorited and bookmarked, so I will just sit back and -patiently- wait for you to update!

ch 10- ummm, you know you just said that harry's accidental magic altered the clocks where in the previous chapter when he was asking narcissa how he was still there, she told him it was because he didn't finish the oath. personally i like the last bit where he sabotaged himself, instead of narcissa lying to him? oh well, just thought i'd point it out. also when luc and the boys were talking to harry's would-be rescuers, luc said he didn't want to be a death-eater or join voldemort or something along those lines though in every other conversation with him, he's loyal to voldy. just odd little things i noticed

well, every one is back with their bits more or less intact, so thats a plus...AND har will be able to lose his unwanted soul hitch hiker but V snitching those kids sounds down right ominous.

still your big fan

oh good we're passed the 'kick har around lots' bit. i hate those. whoa... fawks defected.
just what the heck IS dumbles... he ain't human that for sure.
har's gonna be needing serious therapy, though being able to pick between real and false will help.

you're going to finish the story when you have the time right? you're not going to abandon it are you?

I really love this story and can hardly wait to read more! Please update soon! Also I like how the characters are in character!

ch. 29 is awesome! Stupid Dumbledore! Is Fawkes going to completely stop Dumbles from hitting them with a spell?