rate_review Reviews

Wow. That was distubing but it was still good.

Sooo sad!!! Poor boys!

It was so sad! But it was wonderful!

I thought the chapter was wonderful, but what about showing us the first meeting between Harry and his Aunt Rose?

Wow. We seem to be in something of a rush. It was great all the same. I will wait patiently for the next update. But not too patiently! I think that Bellatrix deserves to die.

First off, let my just say welcome to AFF. I am very glad you are here because I LOVE this story and would not have read it on ff.net

That being said, I can not wait to read more of this! It moves a bit faster then I like, but it is wonderfully written and the idea behind it is very good. I would love to see a bit more explanation and description in it though, because it can get a bit confusing with how it seems to jump around a bit.

Looking forward to more!

har is a bit Har God Sue. ('incredible cosmic powers'.... but not the itty bitty living space.) Still, i'm looking forward to seeing where you're going to go. Even so, please watch the typos. things like Vial instead of Vile. words that sound the same but have different meanings. I've spotted a couple in the last chappies. if you're not sure of a word, instead of guessing Dictionary.com it. It makes me cringe when a story i would otherwise enjoy is full of such mistakes.
Sweat heart? now that's a disturbing mental image. It calls up this forlorn heart shape with beads of sweat rolling down it. *cringes.
ooooh, i do hope Myrtle gets her ceddy. XD

Wonderful!

Wow...this story is HOT!!!

Oh I can't wait for Harry and Draco's bonding...