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for The Ultimate Betrayal

by AddictedToMocha

schedule July 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
*grins* I hope you continue this!! I love it when Harry talks in Parseltongue instead of ignoring it!

*grins* Update soon!!
schedule July 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
first, love the name lol. second, really loving the story so far. i've read a few time travel stories, but i like the concept behind this one and i can't wait to see how things progress with arae along for the ride and how different harry's attitude is goign to be. keep up the great work, i'm looking forward to more :D
person Lemrinth
schedule June 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Nice plot. I do look forward to the updates. Though, since I am new here I do not know how to keep track of this story...
person beroati
schedule June 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I have to say I like this version better than the FF one, not that I didn't like that one either but this is a lot more intriguing than the first one. I am eagerly anticipating for your next update.
person jami_lee
schedule June 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I like this story!! You are very talented writer. I enjoy reading your stories. You have away of pulling a reader in.
person degwen
schedule June 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I really love this!
schedule June 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Harry will make them all pay. Hope he has a little fun along the way.
person Kades
schedule June 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I followed you on fanfiction.net, too many are deciding to just drop there stories.
Thank-you for putting in the effort to continue sharing your stories with us.
person sophosas
schedule June 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I like the new start
schedule June 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hello everyone!
So I dont know how to reply on here yet but I do have update alerts on my Twitter account. (@EverInquisitive)
Other than that I dont know how to alert you...
Thank you so much for the feedback!