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for The Ultimate Betrayal

by AddictedToMocha

schedule May 3, 2022 at 12:00 AM

This is amazing, please continue.

schedule January 5, 2016 at 12:00 AM
good start, I'd be curious to see where you take it
person Sonnenfrost
schedule June 7, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I Love both versions of this story wether he returns to being eleven or fourteen. Both stories are in fact the best of their kind.
Though this story has a major difference to the other version.
The relationship between Harry and Arae seems much smoother. I thought it strange that Harry would be so casual about the goddess, considering the second chance and all.
the fact that Harry is already sorted should make him quite charming for the masses.

Another point is the moment to which he returned.
Harry sure got the perfect moment to return - he is already no longer speaking with Ronald and the most part of the school and there is the Jule Ball which he can use to show his preference of male companions. He could ask Blaise, as he is both a neutral wizard and quite good looking. This way the girls would back off.

I hope you find the inspiration to finish your story. Letting it be like this would be sad.
I look forward to the day you decide to update.
person Jeane
schedule April 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
this is so interesting :) Would you be continuing? It was written good and I had a nice time reading it. Pls update soon!
person Diana
schedule March 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Update soon!
person secrettheshadow
schedule November 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This is an interesting idea and i wish to read more. please update soon.
person kmoaton
schedule October 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This is so totally different than your version on FF.net! I think I'll love them both for very different reasons!! Can't wait to see more of this one too!
person Stephanie
schedule August 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
sweet!!! i hope you update soon i'm so looking forward to your rewritten work!
is there a way i can get alerted for your next update? if so may you please tell me?
please update soon! n_n
person BookWorm230
schedule August 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait for the next chapter : )
person Anon
schedule August 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Such an amazing story. It's changed slightly from the original though I see. Sorry if I offend but I kinda like this version a little better so far. Please update soon. xx