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I LOVE this!!! I think Snape is so sweet in his thoughts. He may be totally angry and annoyed at himself but he can't help how he feels and I loved how he had a tiny bit of hope because she didn't snatch her hand away or look at him in disgust when he helped her stand up. I love how you are writing these two and I'm so glad it's showing up here on aff!

One side note... periods and commas go on the inside of quotation marks... just for future reference on any new stories you might be writing but it doesn't hurt anything at all :)

Hi, I'm a refugee from FF.net. This is sooo good, I'm really intrigued. I don't know if you've noticed or not but you have a duplicate paragraph that needs to be deleted.

I can't wait of the next chapter!!

This is a very interesting story, so far. I am intrigued by her innocence and his anger. I think they will both have to relax A LOT for any movement toward one another to occur, and I look forward to seeing you pull it off. :-) Thank you! HG4eva

glad to see you here!

Welcome to AFF! Just wanted to let you know that this sounds like an interesting story so far. Though, one of your words did not makes sense. It was at the beginning when you were describing what Snape was imagining. I think you were going for "fetal" when describing Hermione in bed. If not, I apologize for bother you ^^ Looking forward to seeing where this is going. Also, when she apologizes to professor Snape, there seems to be an extra latter before the ?

Yay you're here too!! oh happy day