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for Because you heard me right

by Velveteenbunny

person Jo
schedule February 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
That was an interesting dream for Hermione to have. :) I hope you post the next chapter soon.
schedule January 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Fascinating. More to come?
schedule July 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
ah...and the focus changes :)
schedule July 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wow im breathless at the vision of Snape playing the violin! I love it....mmmm thanks for updating. The story js great. I love Snape laughing at her from cursing hhehe. U think hermione will get Snape a secret Christmas gift? Does hermione know much about music in urbstory?
schedule July 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
HA ha ha! When I was reading the dream sequence i was thinking, man this is a bit rushed but super hot! than I realized it was a dream and I wanted to curse Ginny for waking her up. I think that if the dream had gone on a little longer maybe Hermione wouldn't have thought it was a nightmare... lol

Can't wait to read the next chapter!
schedule July 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wow..... nice dream! It was nice to hear Snape open up ! Keep upvtje great work
schedule June 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted to point out before I moved on to reading chapter 4, that in chapter three you re-posted the paragraph from chapter two about how Snape refuses to shop when the students shop. It is right after when he sat down for the quiditch match. I was unsure if this was intentional or not, so I figured I would bring it to your attention. Good story so far though.
schedule June 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I'm enjoying your story and look forward to more chapters. That Luna is one smart cookie, poor Severus didn't expect her to nail him. :-)
schedule June 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ok! I'll be waiting for your wonderful story. Do not delay, I hope to be like 100 episodes. Your imagination captivates me. Bye.
schedule June 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I am liking this so far! thanks for sharing here! I can't wait to read more and hopefully soon!