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for Candid Alley

by Lomonaaeren

person chester
schedule July 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
am I wrong in wanting this to be more than a one-shot? I would love for them to have a happy ending.
person Kia
schedule June 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Beautifully written. The prose was full of gorgeous details, but tight too. Nothing superfluous. I love the idea of Harry being tempted by all the 'what ifs'.

Something occurred to me. It's an exotic take on the cliche 'Harry stumbles on the internet and Drarry slash', no? *laughs*
schedule June 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
oh so very nice but those two see the ttruth and donot grab it , it is a little sad.....
person SParker
schedule June 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hmm...That was unusual. It had the makings of a 'should I or shouldn't I continue this?'.
Why not a two shot?
schedule June 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic!!!! I hope they come together!!!
person chester
schedule June 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
happy ending please!!!
schedule June 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
not a thing wrong with your descriptive skills, that's for sure. I wonder how long malfoy and har will duck and dip around each other until one of them is brave enough to move forward with the 'truth'.