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September 28, 2018 at 12:00 AM
very good. I just wish it hadn't ended so soon
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May 16, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I love the story can't wait for an update
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February 9, 2015 at 12:00 AM
How much longer until you get back to this story I really want more badly
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April 3, 2014 at 12:00 AM
update soon!
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February 4, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Please, update soon!
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November 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
really hoping to see more of this soon...really liking how it started out.
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September 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Next chapter please! I read a lot of fanfics but its not that easy to find a good yaoi smut and a I hope your will be. Interesting idea qith Vernon. Usually people show him like a hearthless monster thet rapes and abuses poor Harry. Good that finally someone will write i a bit diferent. And there are not enought fanficts where Harry is a slut which saddening me. I hope you will comtinue and update soon!
P.s
Sorry if you dont understand what I wrote but english is not my first lanuage and I learning it only for a few years
P.s
Sorry if you dont understand what I wrote but english is not my first lanuage and I learning it only for a few years
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September 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Add more please. Want to see where you take the story!
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September 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Well after reading a post a person put up in my Weasley's Slut challenge I am trying to go back to the challenges that were taken up and giving better reviews, the Weasley's Slut will take some time to catch up. The problem is that earlier I didn't have much to say at the time, I prefer waiting to see how stories go, but now I have some things for this story.
First off even though I asked for a more character Vernon, I must admit that I am a little depressed about him stuffing Harry back into his cupboard and I honestly hope that when you update this fic that Vernon will just have Harry sleep in his bed with him while he keeps himself inside of Harry at night.
I don't really want Vernon to be too kind to Harry but he should be kind enough to prepare Harry for the first time as he can believe that a more pleasurable experience will cause Harry to want more or something along the lines, it should be more dubious con then rape, in other words it can start out with Harry saying no but have him change those no's to pleasure and other such things.
I also hope that later on Vernon will have Harry working at Grunnings, possibly as an intern or such, where he allows his factory workers or bosses to have a taste of Harry's ass as rewards or something along the line.
Another thing I hope for later is a daddy kink as I have a thing for that and maybe after Vernon's month or whatever with Harry Dudley can get a piece of the action to without Petunia knowing.
Now here is a question?
Will Harry become some sort of creature later on that feeds off of sex or a special type of wizard?
Later on can Harry make contact with the Horcrux which later leads him down the Dark path in a way similar, but not exactly to, Harry Potter and the Descent into Darkness as that was one of my all time favorite plot devices?
I hope that this review is better then my last and that you will continue this story soon.
First off even though I asked for a more character Vernon, I must admit that I am a little depressed about him stuffing Harry back into his cupboard and I honestly hope that when you update this fic that Vernon will just have Harry sleep in his bed with him while he keeps himself inside of Harry at night.
I don't really want Vernon to be too kind to Harry but he should be kind enough to prepare Harry for the first time as he can believe that a more pleasurable experience will cause Harry to want more or something along the lines, it should be more dubious con then rape, in other words it can start out with Harry saying no but have him change those no's to pleasure and other such things.
I also hope that later on Vernon will have Harry working at Grunnings, possibly as an intern or such, where he allows his factory workers or bosses to have a taste of Harry's ass as rewards or something along the line.
Another thing I hope for later is a daddy kink as I have a thing for that and maybe after Vernon's month or whatever with Harry Dudley can get a piece of the action to without Petunia knowing.
Now here is a question?
Will Harry become some sort of creature later on that feeds off of sex or a special type of wizard?
Later on can Harry make contact with the Horcrux which later leads him down the Dark path in a way similar, but not exactly to, Harry Potter and the Descent into Darkness as that was one of my all time favorite plot devices?
I hope that this review is better then my last and that you will continue this story soon.
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June 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon! I really like this. :)