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write more its really good

I hope you write more! This story is great.

So what explains his link to the DL if there are no Horcrux's in this? also, watch those typos and misused words. You had shuttered (meaning to shut window shutters) in place of shuddered (meaning obviously, to shudder).
Blinks. Snapes attraction to har has really sped up in this chappie. it feels a little rushed. Your pacing in the previous chappies was fine. It's okay for the attraction to develop slowly.

#1- laughed so hard over harry's reaction to snape saying he was going with him, i could just picture the scene and their reactions so well.
#2- I'm so getting flashbacks to dragonsong (my fave of the dragonrider novels) when menolly was getting setup with her clothes and stuff hehe and i loved the scene with teh dragon and the goat, and once again i can just picture the look on harry's face lol
*skips off to read more*

all caught up now and i love this story so far, and the bit with the hinkypunk had me snickering as it plotted revenge on snape hehe. and poor harry, you would know he'd still manage to get himself into trouble some how or another. wonderful job, keep it up, i can't wait for more :)

Love this and I can't wait for an update!

what an interesting idea. i don't think i've seen a 'cross over'? like this before... plenty of Har fae or elf encounters but few to no har dragon. this is rather fun. pls keep it up.
do sex demons get a boost from taking someones virginity or is it just like regular sex to them. I'm also assume they don't do the whole 'steal your soul while we're getting it on thing'. anywho, why'd she target har?
get the feeling dumbles is going to be misplacing snape very soon? :P
looking forward to next chappie.

This is a very good story so far. Please, please, please update soon. I can't wait for more. :)

xoxo,
kitkat