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June 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Good start!
Loving it so far.
Loving it so far.
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June 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
this is turning into something that is drowning in 'Sue' age or possible 'Stu' age since it's about a male. Sooooo totally Mary Sue (wiki will explain if you don't know what that is.)
Still, some times an unashamed and well written 'Mary sue' can be fun since the brain doesn't have to work much. Sorta like reading a mills and boon. You can just sit back, suspend your disbelief and enjoy the ride.
At any rate, this is one of those fun ones, so I'm going to continue reading.
ty for something light to break up the angst and drama I've been reading. ^^
Still, some times an unashamed and well written 'Mary sue' can be fun since the brain doesn't have to work much. Sorta like reading a mills and boon. You can just sit back, suspend your disbelief and enjoy the ride.
At any rate, this is one of those fun ones, so I'm going to continue reading.
ty for something light to break up the angst and drama I've been reading. ^^
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May 31, 2012 at 12:00 AM
off to a good start though the abrupt shift in font between page one and two was rather startling. page two font was a bit harder to read.
anyway, it's nice to see someone beyond the golden three and crew doing a time walk.
anyway, it's nice to see someone beyond the golden three and crew doing a time walk.
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May 31, 2012 at 12:00 AM
It's a good story. Would you mind changing the font back to the one in the first chapter. I found the font in the second chapter very hard to read. Thank you for writing this story.
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May 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I like your story. I can't wait to read more.