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Hi...i just read this story in one go and i have to say i am enjoying it immensely...i've read a lot of time-travel fics, but this one is different and i like it a lot. seeing severus and narcissa and lucius like this is a really good read and i love how you draw on one of the sour and unbelievable points in the Harry Potter series; why would Sirius go after Peter, leaving Harry with Hagrid when he knew that if anything happened to the POtters he was responsible for Harry? Considering that Harry was given to the Dursleys the night after Halloween, the night of November 1st which is also when Sirius went after Peter. That never sat right with me; so thank you for bringing that up and fixing it,

Yeah on the removal of ron; i hated him so much in the series. are you going to include the weasley twins? they were always my favourite of the weasley family. again loved this story

this site doesnt have alerts or anything like that, so there's no way of knowing if a story has been updated unless you check the site regularly. however, i have a facebook account under the name mykkila09 and i was wondering if it would be too much trouble for you to leave me a message there letting me know when a new chapter is added

Very nice..first time I've seen Lucius or Narcissa as the ones being sent back before.

Wow. That is all I can say. I hope I remember to come back and check on your fic regularly. Sadly, I tend to forget quite a bit. I was originally thinking that it would just be "another" fic to just read. This is just wow. It is intriguing. I like how you are sticking to the storyline. Some parts are still what I was thinking I was going to get, but I cannot wait to see how it ends. I don't know if that makes sense, but this one is pretty awesome. You have a great storyline and it has dragged me in.

i love this story. can't for for the next chapter

I love love love this story!!!!! Can't wait for the next chapter!!!

Ch.10 was awesome, I cant wait for the next parts to come out!

I hope you're able to update soon again! ^_^

This is really good.

Absolutely love this story ^_^ I can't wait to see whats going to happen next with the children, so please update chapter 11 soon ^_^

I thought things were going too smoothly there! Good job! lol

Really enjoying so far!

i like the story. its pretty good.