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for Harry Potter and the Black King

by Phoenixstrike

schedule June 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I have followed you from that other site, and I'm sure I reviewed your story on the other site or at least alerted it. I love how you ended the story as apparently Harry and Draco forgot the silencing wards. Hmm, I cannot wait to see how things go in the morning. I'm sure that someone's going to remind them of necessary sound insulation between the two rooms. I'm a bit surprised that Hermione didn't do anything to ward the room the instant the acts were heard. Then again, I cannot help but wonder if she's mildly turned on by the idea of two hot guys going at it...hmm I'm sure some girls out there feel that way.
schedule June 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Poor Ron!!! I adore this story!!!
schedule May 31, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Whoa. This is incredible. I've read the first few chapters before but I somehow missed the others. I wish it wasn't so complicated to recieve notification e-mails whenever my favorite stories on Adultfanfiction.net gets updated. I would definitely sign up for yours. I shouldn't have to go through another website that I hate to get notifications about this one.
schedule May 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love this story so far..I haven't finished reading what you have posted yet, but I'm up to ch.4..I think..with Harry and Draco in the muggle world and oh my gosh! I was laughing sooo hard on that chapter XD Especially when Draco thought he had won something else haha..yesss priceless! Also, Draco wanting the teddy bear was just too cute and damn Malfoy with a pierced tongue..yummeee! This story is really amazing..the fight to rescue Draco was very detailed and intense..I cannot wait to see what else this story holds. :)
schedule May 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
well damn, sucks to be them huh. Still, couldn't happen to a nicer bunch of 'tards.^.~
Har n Draco are really adorable together. I thought he was going to wait til they got the other horcrux first, before he worked on ditching his voldi bit?
looking forward to more.