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for Harry Potter and the Black King

by Phoenixstrike

schedule June 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ah so we have yet to discover Snape's love for Lily Evans. That should be an interesting conversation when it comes. I really hope that Harry's plan didn't involve endangering himself in an attempt to get to the snake. What about the scene from Bagshot. Is it possible that the snake may be there lying in wait, or would she have shown up when they visited Godric's Hallow?
schedule June 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
shakes my head at molly.
I think har really needed that. even if they found nothing, it was purging to go to Godric's Hollow.
while i don't expect things to be all sunshine and roses, I'm glad that Ron and Draco have buried the hatchet.
schedule June 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
That was heart-achingly bittersweet chapter!
schedule June 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I'm sure Snape didn't want to go there because he still blames himself for Lily's death. I like where you're going with this and cannot wait to find out what you're doing with Slytherin's birth place. I cannot remember if they've taken care of the locket yet. I've been reading too many fan fictions to remember, but I think they did. So, I'm guessing they'll be finding the Cup next.
schedule June 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Love this soo much. I started reading it on FFdotnet.. but now its sexier!! :) Thank you this story is amazing!
schedule June 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This was just made of pure win. XD I laughed, I gasped, and laughed some more in all the right places. This was such a treat to read that I sincerely felt as if this was part of the original 7 part story. I was taken by surprise in some parts, such as Mrs. Weasley being homophobic, but I shrugged it off and rolled with it. Loved this story a lot!! Only took me two days to read through it. The part where Draco produced a male lion as his patronus had to be my favorite part of this story!! I know you're not done, so I await your next chapter "by return owl". Sincerely with best wishes, from one fanfic author to another, Zarafla Kirtan-Pherrin
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schedule June 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Great last line there!! lol

Really enjoying the story so far. Can't wait for more!
schedule June 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
*chuckles to herself* Lovely.
schedule June 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
My favourite chapter so far. Looks like a turning point and some things in the relationship of most characters are sorting out slowly, but surely.
I'm glad you've joined this site and I can keep reading the mature version.
I've been posting my stories here for probably about two years now and it's good for me that you've chosen exactly this site for your wonderful fanfiction. I've already added you to my favourite authors.
Keep updating your amazing story!
schedule June 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
well, that was an... eventful coming out. Still they have the makings of a very good team.
tch molly. shakes my head at her.