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for Harry Potter and the Black King

by Phoenixstrike

schedule December 26, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This was absolutely great!! Draco was the definition of hilarious!! I laughed out loud so much over him and his reactions!
person Rya
schedule February 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
i absolutely love your work! just the right amount of sappy, delicious, naughtiness, and 'icantbloodyputitdown' intrigue...BRILLIANT!!! please write more as I've depleted your available source of awesome. b( ̄▽ ̄)d
person thrnbrooke
schedule August 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful!!!!
schedule August 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
on the whole a good chappie. a few misused words but apart from that. when you had rustled did you mean rattled? (rustled meaning stealing or stolen and rattled meaning shaken) Also it's slain not slayed. I'm not sure if Slayed is actually a word.


Still, V's dead. So's dear Bella. Pity it cost Luc Cissa.
But the majority of good guys survived... and Har is a godfather so its all good. ^^
person thrnbrooke
schedule August 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh wonderful!!!! I'm almost sad to see this coming to an end. I'm happy everyone is getting their happily ever after but I'm sad to see it come to a close.
person djaddict
schedule August 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Aaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhh!

Evil, evil author!

Not Draco or Narcissa!

*pouts*
schedule August 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!! Omfg! That was a horrible cliff hanger! Gawd please update like fast! Please!
schedule August 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
So many, many losses. Still, they're doing better than can be expected with such a small amount of training. Damn, it's going to be cissa or draco as dies... i'm betting Cissa. If har loses draco now, it might brake him and all would be for nothing.
person thrnbrooke
schedule August 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh no!!!! Such horror!!! Poor Tonks and Ron!!! Will Draco die?
schedule July 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
okay, that was seriously harsh. it was probably the least of what he deserved but it's never easy for a good person to send another to their deaths, no matter how bad they were. V went relatively easy on him though... all things considered.

Go Har. There's Gryffie courage for you... or maybe foolhardiness. At any rate, it needed to be done.

Did V feel anything when his soul bits got destroyed? Even Har crux?

That's a heavy, heavy job. Getting ready to fight and so quickly. Still, at least the order know where snape and draco stand now.

So, the Hallows and the elder wand get no play in this fic?

and the countdown to the final battle begins.
That letter of draco's was poignant. I hope luc takes his advice and ignores the call.