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schedule March 30, 2016 at 12:00 AM
wonderful progression on the feelings of everyone. I hope you have the chance to finish one day
person e.pressnell
schedule February 20, 2014 at 12:00 AM
wow i love this fanfic !!!
person Takamiko22
schedule July 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh my goodness this story is amazing. I am so excited about the next chapters.
schedule December 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Love the story so far. I always love a good Harry/Lucius story. Please let me know when you update at onecent1960@hotmail.com
Thanks
person taran
schedule December 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love this story soooooooo much. I hope that you'll update more soon
person Alisa
schedule July 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon! This is a very good story. I'm surprised anyone would review it with complaints about OOC behavior when, Lucius' original character wouldn't have loved Harry anyway--like, the whole premise is generally OOC, so that's kind of stupid to expect Lucius to be the same. Also, I find your writing style nicely refined. Even though I can tell you continue to work on your craft, your skill is already evident. I do wish you would put effort into making sure you use the correct form of "than" vs "then" as that is a particular error that I see often. While there are other spelling errors, I understand you're not typing this in a format that would alert you, so I don't feel that it takes away from the story that much. If you need a beta, you need only ask. I'm very pleased with this fic and I can't wait for an update. :]
schedule June 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hi i just wanted to let you know I am so happy that this story has made its way here from FF.Net. I remember finding it a little while there and it is my absolute favourite Harry/Lucius pairing story that I have read so far (and I have read quite alot >.<) Cant wait to read more chapters from this amazing story =)
schedule June 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
*hands out ear plus. Okay brace yourselves. *SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!! They're just so, sooooo, sooooooooooooo gushingly CUUUUUUUUUUTEEEE!
okay, done with the fangirl ish squeals now. It's just, they're adorable together, no really they are.
schedule June 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I so can't wait for the next chapter. Their first date was so cute! Great story.
schedule June 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
yay, new chappie. luc distraction technique... fail. :P
Dear lil Gin Gin really needs to get a clue and har needs to control his rage... though i imagiine that'll come with practice.
Heh, nice one har. Way to tame that veela.
I spotted a typo or two vial (lab use glassware) for vile (horrible, nasty in the extreme, eeeevvvvvvvvvvvvvvil) Watch that, neh?