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June 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
yes I did like Harry's show of power and how it's akin to the wind :)
And I especially liked him snoring on his trip on the wind lol. I'm finding Draco and his thoughts very interesting. I think the one to understand how that world actually works first just might end up being Draco... probably as he observes Harry making it work lol.
And I especially liked him snoring on his trip on the wind lol. I'm finding Draco and his thoughts very interesting. I think the one to understand how that world actually works first just might end up being Draco... probably as he observes Harry making it work lol.
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June 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I really like the way that you get into describing the magic in this.. the sheer wildness of it and I think that the wind lends itself so well to this story. I have to admit that this story has really gained my interest because of the way you are writing that specific part of it especially. I can't wait to see the way that you incorporate this into the story! I had to re-read teh descriptions in this thrid chapter several times just because I loved teh flow and eloquence of it all.. well done!
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June 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh it wouldn't be any fun if Draco wasn't a pain in the ass.
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June 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
idjits. they shoulda just let 'im go.
seriously, what the hells were they thinking trying to hold har there?
Is the same rot world wide or just the british isles? wow, hogwarts is really going to have a drop in No's considering everyone who can is getting out.
Could they go after har or is it more of a 'once he's there he's your problem.' were they striking to hurt or just to capture and what would they have done once they had him?
seriously, what the hells were they thinking trying to hold har there?
Is the same rot world wide or just the british isles? wow, hogwarts is really going to have a drop in No's considering everyone who can is getting out.
Could they go after har or is it more of a 'once he's there he's your problem.' were they striking to hurt or just to capture and what would they have done once they had him?
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May 31, 2012 at 12:00 AM
that...was...AWESOME!!! AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME!!!
I love this story idea and I love a powerful Harry and you write him so well like that. And I didn't even have to wait long for him to show how strong he is! :) (doing a little happy dance)
I'm totally excited about reading this story. Oh... and I really liked how Draco chose Hurricane rather than some of the other worlds offered. I think he was really smart in his thinking and I liked how logical his reasoning was.
*big sigh* I feel like reading it again lol
I love this story idea and I love a powerful Harry and you write him so well like that. And I didn't even have to wait long for him to show how strong he is! :) (doing a little happy dance)
I'm totally excited about reading this story. Oh... and I really liked how Draco chose Hurricane rather than some of the other worlds offered. I think he was really smart in his thinking and I liked how logical his reasoning was.
*big sigh* I feel like reading it again lol
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May 31, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Really like the second chapter too.. I don't think I have read anything like this before plotwise.. brilliant! I am dying to see what happens next.. you really are inspired with the creative flow...
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May 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Well now..this has a good beginning. Will this be intense? Heavy drama?
What inspired this story?
What inspired this story?
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May 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Jeepers you always have so many great ideas for these stories.. I really look forward to the updates on this. The concept is fantastic, and I have already gotten attached to reading in just the one chapter.. please update quickly? Your stories are so entertaining and get my mind cranking and my imagintion whirling.. thank you for that!!
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May 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
whoooooo this is starting out so goooood! I liked Harry being all intimidating... he will protect those he cares about and Draco sure knows it now. And Draco... knowledge is power and I'm sure he's going to find out all that he can.
Reminds me of my favorite westerns I read when I was a kid... Zane Grey... the dangerous gunfighters who would do whatever it took to protect those they cared about even if it did damage to themselves or damage to how others viewed them. I like dangerous...yep (nodding enthusiastically) yep!
Reminds me of my favorite westerns I read when I was a kid... Zane Grey... the dangerous gunfighters who would do whatever it took to protect those they cared about even if it did damage to themselves or damage to how others viewed them. I like dangerous...yep (nodding enthusiastically) yep!
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May 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
very interesting. how long is this one going to be?
You don't do dystopian very often but when you do you make it work. I look forward to seeing where this one goes.
You don't do dystopian very often but when you do you make it work. I look forward to seeing where this one goes.