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Chap.1

This is really an original idea and I am excited to see how this story unfolds! I'm excited at the number of characters listed and am looking forward to how they will interact with each other. I just love the details to the story that brings it clearly to mind whats happening.

blinks. well Har finally snapped. well, at least this snap didn't have dire consequences. It's nice to see har finally working with the planet rather than fighting it. I hope the seeds do take on some of the magic though since it would be a pity to make all this progress only to starve. :P
What would malfoy shoot? Probably not snakes since har can still talk to them... sort of. nor anything that tries to communicate? what meat is safe for them and what isn't?

I really loved this chapter, the pure joy Harry must have felt flying like that! Truely awesome. It's strange, usually I can see the Weasley's as being reasonably accepting, especially in a life or death sittuation like this, but I can just FEEL their resentmant for Draco, probably fueled by the fact that they are jealous that Draco can take care of himself better on this world than they can... this could get hairy, I love it!

My guess will be... ahhh... no, Malfoy will not tell Harry when others are rude to him. I think Draco was more like making idle conversation that trying to complain to Harry about how the others mistrust him but it sure did hit a hot button with Harry lol. That will make Draco even LESS likely to bring anything up in conversation. That could cause a bad situation to get worse though. Should get better if Draco actually finds something to hunt for food too.

I really liked them being able to float in the air and I especially loved how it was so natural to Harry and how he just joyfully accepted it kind of like how in the original stories he just automatically took to flying.

I think Harry is secretly frustrated that he can't help Malfoy the way he wants to. I know that he felt good feelings when he saw that Malfoy could support himself on his own, but I think there is something hidden behind those feelings that he showed at the end of the chapter.

about #8..

Hmph...you know the Weasleys are really starting to irritate
me. I take it that it will be a Loooong while before a solution
comes up for them & Draco?

damn, missed a chappie. but this power i think is really good for draco. It's really helping him... and helping save Gin had backed the weasleys off nicely. So, the wild magic has given Ted a sort of super sight... that's so cool. I wonder if and what sort of power little Vicky will develop or any kids that are conceived there.

I agree with Draco's view point of learning to work with/appease the planets magic rather than try and dominate it.
I'm glad har can see they are becoming to reliant on him and is taking a step back. Bill and Charlie at least should be able to cope for themselves, new world or otherwise.

I wonder if har can adapt to this planets parsceltongue. ^^

interesting. Will all of those who develop wild magic be able to feel each other? Or only after they've 'tasted' each other?

I love your story. It's so different from the rest of fanfiction I read so far. I like the idea of a new world, and I think this isn't easy to create a new environment, but you succeed in doing it so well done :-D Hope the new chapter will arrive soon.

Brilliant as always. I love the whole concept, and can't wait to read the next chapter. Will there be any sort of government set up at some point, or will theyavoid the higher rule structure for now? After what happened with the corruption of the ministry I would avoid to strong a sense of "government" if I were them! Hope to see more of this soon!!! <3

Silverkitten

Pretty good depiction of grasslands. Your descriptions of them make them seem quite short though as the grasslands here in tornado ally are quite tall and can tower to a height of 6 feet. Also like your dugout houses though i would think that something more like the house in the original star wars movie at tattoie would be more appropriate for a world of wind storms. Keep up the good work.