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July 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I find it interesting that they have finally taken the step to kiss each other but have both avoiding even thinking of anything intimate like that.
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July 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
about #11...
Well, that was..sudden. O_o But, I know you got an explanation
somewhere. By the way, is it just me or is Bill a danger to the
Red Clan? He seems entirely too hostile....and I get the feeling
bad things are going to happen soon with him.
...and since I can't remember where I read it, Hurricane has two moons?
By the way, you're really speeding along on this story...2 chapters in 5 days?
Well, that was..sudden. O_o But, I know you got an explanation
somewhere. By the way, is it just me or is Bill a danger to the
Red Clan? He seems entirely too hostile....and I get the feeling
bad things are going to happen soon with him.
...and since I can't remember where I read it, Hurricane has two moons?
By the way, you're really speeding along on this story...2 chapters in 5 days?
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July 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
about #10..
You came with it. :-)
Personally, I'm thinking their 'link' is unique to them alone, as
opposed to others IF they become connected with the wild magic also.
Was it hard to get this scene together...and I have to ask after
all this time, was English something you majored in at school..and writing
your strength so to speak?
Can't remember if I asked that.
You came with it. :-)
Personally, I'm thinking their 'link' is unique to them alone, as
opposed to others IF they become connected with the wild magic also.
Was it hard to get this scene together...and I have to ask after
all this time, was English something you majored in at school..and writing
your strength so to speak?
Can't remember if I asked that.
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July 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
it seems to be exaggerating most of the traits of those touched by the magic.
Wow, now that's one heck of a battle rush. won't they need fuel for their bodies though even if the world their on helps fuel their magic?
Well, bill has the meat he wanted. :P that should keep em going for ages.
I hope har will be content to settle a bit once he comes off his battle high/ hunting rush. The others still need his help. The planet is doing wonders for Malfoy too.
Wow, now that's one heck of a battle rush. won't they need fuel for their bodies though even if the world their on helps fuel their magic?
Well, bill has the meat he wanted. :P that should keep em going for ages.
I hope har will be content to settle a bit once he comes off his battle high/ hunting rush. The others still need his help. The planet is doing wonders for Malfoy too.
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July 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
That was an interesting thought Harry had at the end, I guess the rest of the family should be thankful they have Teddy to keep Harry around.
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July 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
guess they're adding a plus one to their party.
*hums "Something (dangerous) in the air tonight," and then switches to 'A hunting we will go'.
Good thing Har and crew built into the hill. Far less easy to knock out. I wonder how long it will take those bird things to be wary of the new predators on the block.
*hums "Something (dangerous) in the air tonight," and then switches to 'A hunting we will go'.
Good thing Har and crew built into the hill. Far less easy to knock out. I wonder how long it will take those bird things to be wary of the new predators on the block.
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July 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
about #9...
..and she dares to leave it at a cliffhanger (of sorts) what the
hell..what tha' hell. Man, I feel like whining right now! Where's
the action! :-(
I'm almost tempted to ask you, if you could put two chapters in one.
..and she dares to leave it at a cliffhanger (of sorts) what the
hell..what tha' hell. Man, I feel like whining right now! Where's
the action! :-(
I'm almost tempted to ask you, if you could put two chapters in one.
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July 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I'm really enjoying this story. You're a truly accomplished story crafter! The upcoming battle is going to be awesome, and the link Harry and Draco are forming is really interesting.
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July 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
oh wow... I hope it's just the one bird but I bet there are babies! Interesting that Harry didn't realize they had a werewolf in the group.I wonder who else knows.
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July 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
What a way to end this chapter. Leave us hanging why don't you? *pout* I want to know what happens. I really hope that Harry or Draco don't get harmed. However, I also wonder if the bird has regenerative properties and if it would have all it's claws or if the other one was the female and they are now facing the male of the mated pair. If they have this nest of birds, how many more are potentially on Hurricane? As always I look forward to your next chapter.