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July 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
about #14
Why does it feel like an explosion is waiting to happen on the horizon?
But I agree with Draco, the Weasleys are depending TOO much on Harry for
the answers...and being a bit biased. Have they forgotten that they are
on Hurricane to start over?
Then again, what is their reason for being there? You never really mentioned
what their individual reasons were.
Why does it feel like an explosion is waiting to happen on the horizon?
But I agree with Draco, the Weasleys are depending TOO much on Harry for
the answers...and being a bit biased. Have they forgotten that they are
on Hurricane to start over?
Then again, what is their reason for being there? You never really mentioned
what their individual reasons were.
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July 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
hmmmm, i wonder if the wild magic will cause all of them to desire a pair bond. I'm glad har isn't just letting it rule him. He may have issues with the Weasleys but Teddy at least still needs him.
I look forward to seeing what effects the wild magic has on the others.
I look forward to seeing what effects the wild magic has on the others.
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July 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
ack!!! I was 3 chapter behind! Harry and Draco are very sexy together. I like how Draco seems almost compelled to touch Harry. I wonder that Harry doesn't seem to be the same way. Maybe because he is getting contact with Malfoy because Draco always initiates it. Wonder what would happen if Draco stopped touching Harry so much... would Harry then feel compelled to initiate touching Draco? Hmmmm :)
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July 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
*blinks. haaaa, not often Bill gets to be the troublesome one. Are any of the others experiencing wild magic symptoms? It's interesting that Bill isn't trying to control himself as you'd think being a curse breaker would require quite a bit of control, even if he's officially retired.
Still, is there anything else they can do to bring Bill to heal. As much as he wishes he was, he's not the Alpha in this particular pack.
Still, is there anything else they can do to bring Bill to heal. As much as he wishes he was, he's not the Alpha in this particular pack.
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July 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I have always loved your stories, they are complex, well developed with interesting plots, but I have to say this one is one of my favorites. This new world you have created is fascinating; it has been a while since I have read something so entrancing, you have me checking for new chapters every day!!
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July 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Well, I'm typing this on my phone...and it sucks. Anyway, my second and third thoughts on Bill Weasley a *minor* misfortunate *ahem* accident. Yeah its evil, but damn the werewolf has to go...besides he's only a minor character and youknow those minor characters are Always the first to go......I COMPLETELY agree with what draco said about hermione and I'm glad its mentioned in this story, not everyone needs her, especially how she butts in to give her Superior opinion. I've always felt people like her just stomps on folks independence or make people doubt their Own ability to make good choices....lastly so the white sheep(?) Makes an appearance. Oh by the way, I think Draco needs a cool nickname with those claws of his...too bad 'WOLVERINE' is taken. :)
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July 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
wow! Wild magic induced monkey limes. 0.0' Going native/rapid adaptation at it's finest.
Welp, at least the seeds are growing. I wonder why it appears to be effecting Bill more than the rest? Maybe due to the latent Wolf tint in his system? Will Gin begin to experience some alteration? Maybe for someone whose magic has already settled, it takes repeated dosages. Then again it might be a genetic thing. Most interesting.
I'm glad doesn't want to just cut out on them. They still need him for the mo.
Welp, at least the seeds are growing. I wonder why it appears to be effecting Bill more than the rest? Maybe due to the latent Wolf tint in his system? Will Gin begin to experience some alteration? Maybe for someone whose magic has already settled, it takes repeated dosages. Then again it might be a genetic thing. Most interesting.
I'm glad doesn't want to just cut out on them. They still need him for the mo.
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July 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Yeah I can definitely see a part two of this story, you
have too much going on...or you just simply adding chapters
up to 25.
have too much going on...or you just simply adding chapters
up to 25.
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July 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Epic end to this chapter. I felt like screaming "yes finally!".
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July 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
interesting. i wonder how it's effecting the rest of the group. are they being altered too? I imagine it's effecting har and draco most as they're the ones who use their new talents most.
Crap. that bond must be scaring the cacky out of har. Another thing he never asked for and one that not just ties him to malfoy but urges him to place malfoy in a position of most important. I hope har doesn't try and fight it for to long. it can't be good for him.
having his magic become like an entity in and of itself must be scary for malfoy. the only other one who might be able to relate is bill though i doubt the two would be comfortable talking...
I'm surprised that no ones thought of what long range effects being on a new world might have on a magic touched. From the descriptions to date, it's going to be a pretty heavy one.
Crap. that bond must be scaring the cacky out of har. Another thing he never asked for and one that not just ties him to malfoy but urges him to place malfoy in a position of most important. I hope har doesn't try and fight it for to long. it can't be good for him.
having his magic become like an entity in and of itself must be scary for malfoy. the only other one who might be able to relate is bill though i doubt the two would be comfortable talking...
I'm surprised that no ones thought of what long range effects being on a new world might have on a magic touched. From the descriptions to date, it's going to be a pretty heavy one.