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October 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I finally got to finish this, and I'll be starting on the sequal tonight! Beautifully done, I can't wait to read how their world continues to grow!
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August 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Sooooo awesome!!! I liked that chapter about Ginny's wild magic connecting her with the bird. Her wild magic will get the rest of the Weasley's on board because they can't very well hate on her because her magic makes her powerful in a different way now too. I'm glad they finally have a meat supply to hunt now too.
My favorite part though... Draco's comments in Harry's head that annoy Harry and amuses Draco. Like when Harry told Draco to stop thinking perverted thoughts lol. This was a totally awesome story and I loved loved loved reading it. Thank you so much for taking the time to post this :)
My favorite part though... Draco's comments in Harry's head that annoy Harry and amuses Draco. Like when Harry told Draco to stop thinking perverted thoughts lol. This was a totally awesome story and I loved loved loved reading it. Thank you so much for taking the time to post this :)
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August 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad there's a sequel as this would be a rather abrupt end otherwise. I'm glad Har and Draco were made aware of the wild magics effect. Is that because they aren't native to Hurricane so they can't handle it as well? sort of like the flu virus to people who have never encountered it before. It sort of warps them unless they're made aware of it and reign it in.
Anyway, i look forward to the next story.
Anyway, i look forward to the next story.
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August 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
about #18...
Daayyuuum! How did 2 chapters slip past me??? O_o
1. Out of curiosity, since I'm a visual type of person,
what comparison in looks would you describe the bird?
Sparrow, eagle, falcon...etc
2. I don't know if I've mentioned this, but...for someone
who didn't want to dip into the World of Bonds, you sure as
hell act like you've found your calling. O__O
...at least your bond stories are different.
Daayyuuum! How did 2 chapters slip past me??? O_o
1. Out of curiosity, since I'm a visual type of person,
what comparison in looks would you describe the bird?
Sparrow, eagle, falcon...etc
2. I don't know if I've mentioned this, but...for someone
who didn't want to dip into the World of Bonds, you sure as
hell act like you've found your calling. O__O
...at least your bond stories are different.
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August 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
GGGGGGrrrrrr. WHY is this review thingie being so tetchy.
Ah well, try number 6. >.<
most interesting. I wonder if transfigured meat will be enough to keep it fed and it will be able to keep other birds off them. It will be interesting when it's mating instincts kick in. Well, if it's the birds appearance that's the problem, they could always dye or spell it's feathers different colours.
Hurricane doesn't really encourage exploring does it so Har can't even point her in the right direction. Let's hope the bunny creatures aren't sentient too. :P
That's Gin sorted and Bill. I wonder what and when the others are going to manifest.
Ah well, try number 6. >.<
most interesting. I wonder if transfigured meat will be enough to keep it fed and it will be able to keep other birds off them. It will be interesting when it's mating instincts kick in. Well, if it's the birds appearance that's the problem, they could always dye or spell it's feathers different colours.
Hurricane doesn't really encourage exploring does it so Har can't even point her in the right direction. Let's hope the bunny creatures aren't sentient too. :P
That's Gin sorted and Bill. I wonder what and when the others are going to manifest.
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August 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
ah... either the hatchling will imprint of someone or it will try to eat them lol
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August 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful! I love the attention to character growth in the last few chapters. I'm also ferociously curious about Hermione and Ginny's reactions to the talks about wild magic... will they develop anything, and if they do, do you think it will be extreme, or more subtle like Teddy's abilities? I love the contrast between the gentleness of Teddy's power, and the raw elemental strength of Harry and Draco's abilities. I think it adds a beautiful perspective. I don't know if that was intentional, but I find it very poetic. Great work!!!
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August 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
what a fascinating concept. Becoming different identities with different individuals in the mix. What can the Mumi's do for their new allies though. An alliance can't be all one way.
I'm glad Fleur is helping Bill reign in his wolfishness.
Errrrg. politics is always a pest, but it's even more important when everyone's survival relies on the group being harmonious. Of course, it would be a lot easier if the group members could stop dwelling in the past and move forwards. Chewing old history won't help.
heh, well Draco, ask and ye shall receive. ^^ how's that for enthusiasm.
I'm glad Fleur is helping Bill reign in his wolfishness.
Errrrg. politics is always a pest, but it's even more important when everyone's survival relies on the group being harmonious. Of course, it would be a lot easier if the group members could stop dwelling in the past and move forwards. Chewing old history won't help.
heh, well Draco, ask and ye shall receive. ^^ how's that for enthusiasm.
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July 31, 2012 at 12:00 AM
about 16...
You know, if they stop calling each other 'Potter & Malfoy', then
maybe they'd stop circling each other like tomcats trying to feel
each other out.
Have to admit that Slythern in Harry really came in handy to handle
the close-minded Weasleys..and yes they are. I know how irritating it
is trying to talk to people who refuse to hear.
By the way, loved that one shot 'Liars Mask', had me actually feeling sorry for
Ron....just a teeny bit.
You know, if they stop calling each other 'Potter & Malfoy', then
maybe they'd stop circling each other like tomcats trying to feel
each other out.
Have to admit that Slythern in Harry really came in handy to handle
the close-minded Weasleys..and yes they are. I know how irritating it
is trying to talk to people who refuse to hear.
By the way, loved that one shot 'Liars Mask', had me actually feeling sorry for
Ron....just a teeny bit.
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July 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
about #15...
Goood grief! Will someone whack Hermione on the head real
quick & tell her to calm down??? O_o
But, I'm glad the Bill situation has been dealt with for now.
Now, we'll see how it goes. I kinda figured he was going 'wolf'
on everyone, let's see if he can control it.
Has anybody noticed the bond that Harry & Draco has yet?
By the way, the 'sheep' are very interesting. What other creatures you
have in store for us?
Goood grief! Will someone whack Hermione on the head real
quick & tell her to calm down??? O_o
But, I'm glad the Bill situation has been dealt with for now.
Now, we'll see how it goes. I kinda figured he was going 'wolf'
on everyone, let's see if he can control it.
Has anybody noticed the bond that Harry & Draco has yet?
By the way, the 'sheep' are very interesting. What other creatures you
have in store for us?