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for Punish Me

by Sparrowhawk

schedule May 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I'm very intrigued by your story... I think it's a wonderful idea and I look forward to reading more
person YaoiGirl
schedule May 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love what you've written so far! Can't wait to see the continuation! Please update quickly! :)
person imsandir
schedule May 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I really like it so far, looking forward to seeing where you take it!!!
schedule May 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I liked it :) You actually did a really good job with the flow of the story and setting up the personalities of the characters. Since you asked (but not because it was necessary) I would have liked to have seen more hints that Harry was a sub before Draco figured it out. It would have been more fun to see that stretched out a bit more :)

schedule May 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This really got my interest.
I like how Harry doesn't just give in and is at first reluctant.
I can't wait to read more and see how this goes :)
person djaddict
schedule May 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oooooh! Sounds yummy so far.

But, you know you are kind of evil for stopping there!
person sarah999
schedule May 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Love it, love it, love it! It's so good; I love the interactions between Harry and Draco and how Draco knew Harry is a sub.
I really, really, really hope you update soon. : )
schedule May 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
All I can say is I LOVED IT!! UPDATE UPDATE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE! I seriously can't wait for more and to see how Severus takes it.
schedule May 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Not a bad beginning. Keep up the good work!
person sarah999
schedule May 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wow, thanks for the super quick update. : )
I loved Harry's nightmare/dream; was the Master in it Snape? Sure seemed like it. Is this going to be a Severus/Harry pairing, or will there be more added?
I look forward to the next update. : )